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Midnight Pearl

Midnight Pearl A young Romeo went to Tahiti With diving gear and determination He sought the finest pearl for his sweetie For soon the two lovers would join as one He found a shell far bigger than the rest Disappointment came when he opened it In a gown of midnight black it was dressed For his lady’s soft hand it seemed unfit White pearls he found -- none as grand as the black He took the black pearl to a gem setter Who, looking at it, was taken aback He said next to white pearls, this was better If you want to impress a pretty girl Bestow the treasure of a midnight pearl *Entry for Russell’s “Midnight Pearl” contest. By Carolyn Devonshire, written April 17, 2012

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Date: 4/23/2012 9:53:00 AM
I like this Carolyn, love the sonnet form, yet this is different some how. a really interesting story, harry
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Date: 4/20/2012 9:28:00 AM
I never heard of black pearls Caroly, I get info from the most amazing places. Love this pearl of a poem, it has a sweet message. Luv, Lizzie
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Date: 4/19/2012 10:08:00 AM
Very original take on and lovely story
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Date: 4/18/2012 3:16:00 PM
A black pearl - seems almost sinister. "In a gown of midnight black." Love this image. Love, daver
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Date: 4/17/2012 8:13:00 AM
I smell a winner.. Wonderful job my friend..:JP]
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Date: 4/16/2012 10:56:00 PM
Very nice Carolyn, I'm sure Russel will like it.
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Date: 4/16/2012 10:27:00 PM
quite an interesting verse. i hope the girl liked the midnight pearl. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/16/2012 12:56:00 PM
This is one of the best I've seen so far!! Lovely! Key West fishing?? Wow Carolyn that sounds like an amazing time. Wishing you a great time! Luv Michael
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Date: 4/16/2012 12:52:00 PM
nicely done Carolyn... line 7 is a gem.. best wishes for the contest....Joseph
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Date: 4/16/2012 12:52:00 PM
Carolyn! I love this little poem! It reads like a story and I want to know if the girl loved the midnight pearl. Good job and best of luck in the contest:)
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