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Midnight In the City

Midnight in the City It's midnight in the city, The stars are dull above the lights, A cat curls round a garbage can, With a hiss the rats to fright. A curly haired disheveled drunk man, Shuffles down the sidewalk, Breaks his bottle on a dumpster, Curses with awful talk. A tired overtimer changes shoes, For a walk to a parking lot. High heels are pretty in the day, After that, they're not. High above in a lighted window, A baby cries, and a tired mother tries To soothe its pain with singing, ‘Til the window’s glow dies. A boombox bellows from an old tin car, Uncaring that it's disturbing the peace, And I roll over in my penthouse, Amid silk sheets and sleep.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/2/2018 5:27:00 PM
Such a wonderful rhyme, Sunlite.. So detailed with terrific imagery!! An enjoyable reading.. Blessings!
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Date: 6/19/2018 10:15:00 AM
Great Imagery, I've seen this with my own eyes before. Well written my friend SW...All the best...Charlie
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 6/30/2018 5:46:00 PM
Thank you so much, Charles.
Date: 6/18/2018 8:12:00 AM
It s a really beautiful written poem, you have definitely every schenario, no matter in which part of the world you live, some things are common and you have mentions all of them in your poem, glad to know that in the end you manage to sleep,
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 6/30/2018 5:47:00 PM
You're appreciated, Faraz.
Date: 6/17/2018 5:00:00 PM
Beautifully written with excellent descriptions you have given us. Well done Sunlite :)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 6/17/2018 5:35:00 PM
Thank you, thank you!
Date: 6/16/2018 7:22:00 AM
Sun, this is amazing writing
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 6/17/2018 5:34:00 PM
Thank you for that amazing comment.
Date: 6/15/2018 5:34:00 AM
Truly a shining beacon into the life of many. Such an inspirational poem deserves to be both read and published, IMHO. A FAV MY FRIEND AND A TRUE GEM TOO.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 6/15/2018 9:59:00 AM
Coming from you, whom I consider to be one of the best, I am deeply appreciative.
Date: 6/13/2018 9:40:00 AM
Of course the contrast with your shalom, the shalom of silk sheets - by His Grace - caps a great description of The City. Echoes of W.H. Auden, even T.S. Eliot. Blessings & Thanks,SW
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 6/14/2018 9:39:00 AM
I am so flattered! Thank you, Anil.
Date: 6/12/2018 6:37:00 PM
Your midnight jingle has me over the moon!
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 6/14/2018 9:36:00 AM
Thank you, Chance!!!
Date: 6/12/2018 5:00:00 PM
You captured the midnight scene with captivating details SW. Many can relate to the imagery you painted with this lovely poem. So nice to be in that penthouse on silky ambiance.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 6/14/2018 9:36:00 AM
Thank you. You're appreciated!
Date: 6/12/2018 3:34:00 PM
truly descriptive, these slices of life in an evening's landscape... a poetic delight, sun.. huggs
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 6/14/2018 9:35:00 AM
Thank you so much. I always appreciate your comments.
Date: 6/12/2018 12:46:00 PM
Oblivious and uncaring many of us have become to our fellow inhabitants, well done Sunlite. silk sheets indeed...
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 6/14/2018 9:34:00 AM
Thank you!

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