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Midnight Bird Song

songs midnight birds sing,
sound nothing like daybreak birds;
false hope has ended

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/1/2009 12:23:00 AM
Your work fascinates me, I love the way you attack the haiku form. Your caliber and thought process is similar to my own. Continue to wow me!!!...Raul
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Date: 6/25/2009 9:57:00 AM
Kool Haiku James>>James
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Date: 6/23/2009 9:56:00 PM
Nice short poem. I love Haikus. Post some more. TY for your warm comment on mine. Ernilando
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Date: 6/21/2009 12:35:00 PM
I like your Haiku. I can gain many interpertations from it. Sara
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Date: 6/20/2009 2:24:00 PM
This poem is lovely! I like it! Thanks for the nice compliment about my poem! I appreciate it!!
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Date: 6/18/2009 5:29:00 PM
If anyone ever measures my laugh lines....it won't be funny:))
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Date: 6/18/2009 5:01:00 PM
If you want to freak them out? Record the day birds and play it at night! You'll be waking them up answering themselves all over again the same questions from that day, what a riot that would be! They'd be so cranky the next day....Lol let me stop....-AA
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Date: 6/16/2009 11:34:00 PM
Very true Jim.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 6/16/2009 7:54:00 PM
They each give us delightful music whether the sun is shining or the moon is beaming much like your creative pen my friend.
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Date: 6/16/2009 7:51:00 PM
interesting.
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Date: 6/16/2009 5:33:00 PM
well duh! they're as different as night and day. Lol:)) just teasing you! (Who)? you, (Who), alright go back to sleep!....giggle, giggle, -AA
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Date: 6/16/2009 3:41:00 PM
I LOVE DAYBREAK BIRDS AS MUCH AS I LOVE MIDNIGHT BIRDS -day break birds transmit more light-when hope ends all we need is courage and that helps us hope again,that how it works with me,my friend-i love your style my good friend---charma
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Date: 6/16/2009 1:14:00 PM
I believe this haiku goes very deep, you just have to look pass the face presented. Very good job! Thanks for the comments. Nate
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Date: 6/16/2009 11:56:00 AM
There truely is a world of difference between the day and night songs of the birds! You captured it well James! Lovely! ~Tru~
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Date: 6/16/2009 10:46:00 AM
Oh very well done. There is so much sadness listening to an owl in the dark. Regards Heidie
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Date: 6/16/2009 8:48:00 AM
James I enjoyed your haiku very much - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 6/16/2009 6:48:00 AM
A wonderful, interesting haiku!! Well done!~ Carrie
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Date: 6/15/2009 8:00:00 PM
Let hope live...love this haiku..good work.
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Date: 6/15/2009 7:46:00 PM
Let's hope that hope hasn't ended! Fine haiku - you stuck to the 5 7 5 format - everyone doesn't do that. Yours Matthew Anish
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