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Midnight At a 7-Eleven

The chocolate bars are dozing on their shelves, the beers and sodas snoring in the fridge. The magazines, too, have snuggled up under their covers for the night. I tiptoe down the drowsy aisle and back out the door, not wanting to disturb the cashier sitting sleepless behind the counter, catching up on dreams.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/21/2018 11:49:00 PM
Wow Bernard, this is an interesting twist on the sleepy 7-11. I've seen this scenario many a time, especially when in overseas countries. Well written ... Maria
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Bernard Chan
Date: 1/22/2018 3:53:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Maria! Your visits are always appreciated.
Date: 1/21/2018 9:09:00 PM
Lovely writing.Thank you for your comment on my poem.
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Bernard Chan
Date: 1/22/2018 3:52:00 AM
Thank you, Stina.
Date: 1/20/2018 9:52:00 PM
Love this Bernard, little is mundane to a Poet's eye :) xomo!
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Bernard Chan
Date: 1/21/2018 3:27:00 AM
Really appreciate it, Maureen! I was pretty sure nobody would like a poem about nothing happening at a 7-Eleven, so your comment is priceless :))
Date: 1/20/2018 8:32:00 AM
- The night has come and the body should rest ... even at 7-eleven - Hope it will be a peaceful night :) - Great written, Bernard - // Anne-Lise :)
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Bernard Chan
Date: 1/20/2018 7:05:00 PM
Thank you very much for your lovely comment, Anne-Lise :)

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