Middle Age

Granted I was exhausted,
nothing more than usual. 
An innocent toddler staring at me
in a concerning manner, says
 “Wow…your eyes are old.” 
Laughing uncomfortably, I slightly coughed. 
The next fifteen minutes was spent lifting my eyebrows 
hoping to smooth my worn, wrinkled forty - two year old eyes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 4, 2010 at 10:33 AM
Ah yes, the innocence of youth, piercing the heart with its arrows. I feel your pain everytime someone asks me how old my grandson is when I am out with my 6 yr old SON!!!! Your eyes are not worn and wrinkled, they are just wise and mature. You could just respond, "Hey kid, when you've seen the things I've seen, your eyes will look old, too."
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April 12, 2010 at 1:02 PM
Good write Lori- I'm so glad to see you here Smiles
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April 11, 2010 at 10:58 AM
welcome to poetry soup!
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