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Once upon a time in the land of the Hobbits, Fili was annoyed. He wanted excitement. He was the youngest of the twelve dwarves, Dressed in a blue cloak and sporting a yellow beard, He entered into his tree house in an angry mood. Up in the attic he sat on a stool and pondered. That night all fairyland would celebrate The great feast of Midsummer. And everyone Would parade his oft practiced skills. Alas Fili had nothing spectacular to show. In the dim light of the attic he spied a shine. Fili had the best eyesight and somehow knew There below the cupboard lay an alexandrite lode. It shone and magic oozed out of it. What could it be? He grabbed it and saw A parchment with strange signs he could not understand. Yet in the bottom was written so very clear: Use me to fly, turn, swirl, but you must Understand the signs or suffer you will. A Catherine wheel opened the feast lightning the glen. Immediately thousands upon thousands of fireflies Flew around and illuminated the open grassy space. Elves brought in the beer, sweetmeats, firewater. The Firstborns danced around the Maypole, Frog dances abounded as elves escorted the Fairy Queen To her elaborated decorative throne. She smiled And after a while she clapped her hers, and amid the clapping She gave the sign that the much sought contest can start. To be continued

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Date: 8/26/2022 9:27:00 PM
Love your creativity Victor on to the second part...
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Date: 8/25/2022 6:15:00 AM
A fascinating story Victor a most enjoyable read and I’m looking forward to the next instalment… Belle
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Date: 8/24/2022 2:55:00 AM
Nice fantasy writing, Catherine wheel set off the festivities perfectly..Delice
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Date: 8/23/2022 3:24:00 AM
This is an interesting story... I see that it has a second part too... Enjoyed reading Victor... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 8/22/2022 1:59:00 PM
This is beautiful, exquisite, fascinating, great imagery, talented, I LOVE it Victor. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/22/2022 1:44:00 AM
I love whimsical stories... Lovely... Blessings
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Date: 8/21/2022 11:06:00 PM
Magical! So this is the first of how many episodes?
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Date: 8/21/2022 11:15:00 PM
Two only.
Date: 8/21/2022 5:55:00 PM
Very nice, Victor! Looking forward to the next installment!
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Date: 8/21/2022 1:25:00 PM
You have such a colorful imagination, I loved this one of my fav from you :)
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Date: 8/21/2022 10:24:00 AM
Whoa~~You leave us wondering. I agree with Andrea that this is very different from your usual works. I enjoyed reding it. Thanks for sharing and for visiting my page. Sara
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Date: 8/21/2022 9:22:00 AM
Hi Victor… What a magical story ….loved it! Debx
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Date: 8/21/2022 8:40:00 AM
this is sure different from you. But I love how you got fireflies into this!!
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Date: 8/21/2022 7:13:00 AM
Victor, I was completely enthralled by your story. It is incredibly captivating. On the wings of your imagination, I had a great time soaring through this trip. Your story was successful at grabbing the reader's interest. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 8/21/2022 6:36:00 AM
Much enjoyed this exploration on the wings of your imagination, Victor. A story that holds intrigue and attention of the reader. And the ending says more please!
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Date: 8/21/2022 4:49:00 AM
A midsummer feast with magic in the air, Very nicely penned Victor
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Date: 8/21/2022 12:28:00 AM
What a captivating tale. Your imagination flies high up. The tale narrated here captures the attention of the readers from start to finish ! Beautiful....dear Victor. (For two days, I will be away !)
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Date: 8/20/2022 3:57:00 PM
I was captivated by this enchanting tale, Victor. It is so magical and delightful. I am awaiting part two with eagerness. Have a nice day. :)
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