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Part One https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/mid-summer_night_dream_1482320 Concluded Elves, dwarves, mini giants, and hobbits all performed. But last was Fili as he strutted to the middle of the glen. Secretly clutching his alexandrite lode, he flew Straight up ten feet with a view for all to see. Fireflies flew erratically around him, a ghostly shine. As Fili moved his clutched hand, he turned. Somersaulted, spun and returned to his standing stance. Below the people of the glen clapped in awe. But now Fili was worried, how was he to descend And thus receive his well merited prize? It was the River-maid who rescued him, as she flew And whispered in his ear. Change the lode to the left hand She whispered, giving him a luscious kiss. Soon Fili landed and the Fairy Queen beckoned him. You can take your first midnight skinny dipping and eat all The strawberries you like so much, she graciously said. She took his lode, put it on a crown and on his head it sat. And now Fili, the hero, was annoyed no more.

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Date: 8/27/2022 11:55:00 AM
Enjoyed the conclusion to your story/poem very much Victor, it was a wonderful ending, so happy for Fili… Belle
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Date: 8/26/2022 9:21:00 PM
Victor your imagination is wonderfully expressed and it is a joy to read my friend. Superb conclusion. Hope you are well my friend and God bless you...
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Date: 8/25/2022 3:47:00 AM
Cool story, Victor. Filled with excitement and detail. Well done my friend.
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Date: 8/24/2022 1:39:00 PM
what a delightful conclusion you put on your story.
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Date: 8/24/2022 3:55:00 AM
Would love to see this fantasy story written out in a book, lovely write Victor, have a precious day , love !
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Date: 8/24/2022 3:00:00 AM
Eating your fill of strawberries is a happy thought, skinny dipping? think I will miss that delight lol....Delice
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Date: 8/23/2022 10:07:00 PM
Well , skinny dipping and a taste of strawberries. Well done, Victor..
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Date: 8/23/2022 7:28:00 AM
LOL…hohoho… You can take your first midnight skinny dipping and eat all The strawberries you like so much
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Date: 8/23/2022 7:01:00 AM
Creative work you have invented in this one. I wonder if you heard Fairy, elves and hobbit stories as a child? Thanks for sharing and for visiting my page. Sara
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Date: 8/23/2022 4:23:00 AM
A magical mystical story--you had me spellbound reading this conclusion, Victor.
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Date: 8/23/2022 3:29:00 AM
Loved this concluding part too Victor... at last he got to show something spectacular and was rewarded too for that... Have a blessed day... ~ Ani
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Date: 8/23/2022 2:14:00 AM
Hahaha! Kiss has to be a part of your poems always ~ that too, a luscious one
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Date: 8/22/2022 10:41:00 PM
A charming ending to a fascinating tale! I thoroughly enjoyed the poem, Victor, especially Fili's flight and his reward. :)
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Date: 8/22/2022 9:33:00 PM
Victor, We are grateful for transporting us to this magical country filled with dwarfs, gnomes, and witches. An exciting and successful ending to Fili's adventure! Now, may the wreath remain affixed to his forehead for a good long time!
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Date: 8/22/2022 7:15:00 PM
A victorious conclusion to Fili's escapade ! Now let the crown sit on his head for long ! Victor, thank you for taking us to the wonderland of fairies, elves and dwarves.
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