Mid-October Scenery

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For the mid-October contest of Andrea Dietrich
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dipping amber leaves
Earth spray-paint mid-October
crisp breeze, vibrant hues ...
reshaping insight whispered,
quaintness awakened for fall

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Ink Empress

Date: 10/29/2023 3:28:00 AM

You are so good with imagery. Happy for your win! Congratulations

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/28/2023 10:16:00 AM

very nicely done, Sotto. Congrats.

Sotto Poet
Date: 10/28/2023 12:50:00 PM

Much appreciate your reading, placing, and commenting on my poem, Andrea. Be blessed

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 10/18/2023 2:17:00 PM

I love this poem, very refreshing. The autumn season is my favorite of the seasons.

Silent One

Date: 10/16/2023 11:31:00 AM

In a restricted from you created such vivid imagery of Autumn. Great choice of words which help with this form.. An excellent entry for this contest..

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/16/2023 8:45:00 AM

A beautiful and magnificent tanka. Good luck with the contest. Blessings.

Ink Empress

Date: 10/16/2023 7:06:00 AM

Love this tanka on october! So well crafted in few syllables! Love the line “ dipping amber leaves“ so fitting for the theme! “ crisp breeze, vibrant hues “ so autumnal! “ reshaping insight whispered,“ change of seasons and how it can reshape insight as colours too vary so well articulated! Loved reading this!