Mid-October Freckles

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Halfway Through October:
Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich
10/16/2023

Orange mid-October freckles blemish the trees, while Jack Frost etches abstracts on cold window panes. And cinnamon-colored leaves fall with each brisk breeze as Winter subtly approaches, and Summer strains to maintain green canopies till November's freeze.

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Ink Empress

Date: 10/29/2023 2:54:00 AM

I love the opening line the most, so creative and unique! Beautiful imagery! Soulful! Well deserved win. Congratulations

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/29/2023 7:44:00 AM

Thanks, Ink Empress; I appreciate your comments my friend; Emile.

Hilo Poet

Date: 10/28/2023 11:42:00 AM

I love the title-grabber! I read the other Quintain, ababb, and I delight in the marvelous opportunities that this Poetic Form obliges the readers. Yours is a memorable compliment, Emile! My hat's off to you for your righteous 1st placement win in Andrea's contest, my friend! Aloha, William

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/29/2023 7:50:00 AM

Thanks, William; I appreciate your comments; as always, it is good to hear from you my friend; Emile.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/20/2023 8:58:00 AM

Creative and descriptive lines penned about the season change and beauty. Thanks for sharing. Sara K

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/20/2023 11:17:00 AM

Thanks, Sara; I appreciate your comments, my friend; Emile.