Robert L. Hinshaw Poet Limerick

Mickey Mouse

This is written with tons of tongue  in cheek

   But I loved watching Mickey Mouse each week

      He was my favorite star

         Outshone Donny Duck by far

            A talking mouse ne'er to utter a squeak

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Robert Pettit February 2, 2012 at 3:18 PM My lady friend does an excellent Donald Duck impersonation. When we went to Disneyworld in Florida, she spoke to the Donald character that way. Everybody around who heard her got a kick out of it. This is a fine limerick Bob.

Ralph Taylor July 13, 2011 at 12:46 PM Congrats on your win, Sarge. Excellent piece. Nice going. Thanks for your comments. Best to you guys. Ralph

Dr.Ram Mehta July 13, 2011 at 3:36 AM My congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Bobd54a

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 12, 2011 at 7:36 PM Congrats Bob on your super second place win in the movie star contest with this delightful piece making us all smile luv.. kudos ..enjoy..

Poet Destroyer A July 11, 2011 at 6:50 AM Good morning Bob H., how are you? And yes this time I missed alot. I sure missed you and your poetry.. I can always open your poems and always be amazed... Thanks for the smiles here... Take care,..p.d.

Ralph Taylor July 6, 2011 at 2:45 PM Great chuckle, Sarge. Enjoyed. Nice job. Ralphie

Shannon Deane July 5, 2011 at 8:09 AM My youngest is a huge fan of Mickey, and the gang... Sometimes you will find me singing Mickey's tune...

Joshua Lacey June 29, 2011 at 2:34 PM he was a character! :)

James Foulk June 27, 2011 at 12:11 PM Well Bob you went and out did your self. Mickey Mouse, you had better watch it, or the Disney Studio will want a piece of the action. This will go in my favoirtes. also you know how Donald Duck is, you had better lock your door, he really has a tempter as you know.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 27, 2011 at 5:10 AM let's honor Mickey Bob and u did in this great Limerick..luv... my two grand daugters were just in a dance recital over weekend and they did a tribute to Mickey Mouse Clubhouse.. oh I knew all the songs too.. how great wat that? great as this poem luv..

Nette Onclaud June 27, 2011 at 2:53 AM well, mickey will outlive us, robert.. your charm and wit shines, shines!! love this! :) huggs, nette

Dr.Ram Mehta June 26, 2011 at 6:19 PM very cleverly written with humor and wit, Bob

Judy Ball June 26, 2011 at 5:52 PM Nicely done my friend. We all loved Mickey. God Bless, JB

Barbara Gorelick June 26, 2011 at 5:36 PM Your just to clever Mr Bob.. M I C.....K E Y..mouse.. my favorite too. and you'r my favorite. BG

Mike Dailey June 26, 2011 at 5:29 PM Twas Minny though that had my heart She had it from the very start The minny dresses Bows - no tresses How I loved that Disney art mdailey