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Meter Maid

You had to fight for affection from the first moment you were born Had to cry loud, and often too Because your mother fed her addiction before she thought about feeding you You had to fight to go to sleep at night, battle those strange sounds coming from your mother's bedroom When you asked her about the noise, and those strange men passing through Your mother told you, child, grownups are just like kids ... they like to play games too But you also remember her always telling you this: If a man wanna sleep in your bed, snuggle up close to you in an intimate way Like he wants some loving, then he must pay You never listened much to what your mother had to say, but that one thing stuck in your mind to this very day The subject of sex would always come up at some point when you were dating men And you told them all the same thing: If they wanna have sex with you, then you're gonna get paid Once the bedroom door shuts, the clock starts ticking ... and she is the meter maid Didn't matter how nice you are, didn't matter how sweet you talked Everybody had to pay in the end, because her love don't come free ... not even for you, boyfriend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/14/2017 8:21:00 PM
Wow, this is an excellent dramatic verse poem depicting like mother, like daughter with meter maid being a great way to describe them! P & L~Che
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Date: 1/14/2017 4:31:00 PM
Hi Freddie...you express your thought with an able pen. Some things are passed on from mother to daughter in an uncanny mysterious way! This can be turned into a thriller in which the paying men become victims to a 'praying mantis' blood addicted lass!!! Regards // paul
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 1/14/2017 4:50:00 PM
Ty, Paul. Yep, some women are like preying mantis, out for blood, or in this case, take all your money. That is another kind of addiction for your. Love and best wishes to you, my friend.
Date: 1/13/2017 2:00:00 PM
Wow, this is really a very sad poetic story Freddie, it really feels lonely and unwanted. You have expressed these emotion well by merely highlighting them as they sat in the shadows watching. Really cool.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 1/13/2017 2:08:00 PM
Ty, Chris. Yeah you caught the drift of this poem right off the bat. Tried to convey empathy for the Meter Maid by showing what shaped her at a young age. Very insightful comments. Ty for your time. Love always.

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