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Metamorphosis

my earthly path is stormy . . .  tangled and twisted_
        time for a metamorphosis . . .  for rebirth
              there must be introspection and contemplation
       reflection, enlightenment, and mindfulness
                  and perceptions must transform . . . 
  so, like the butterfly . . .  I will change

  ~  this recovery is one of an awakening and a growth
    to move forward I must let go of all hurts
           for they are anchors holding me in chains  ~ 

      it is hard to comprehend the cruelty
              that some people throw like swords
                                 my one thought in my musings
  is that I will ever remain gentle and kind
                       to all . . . 

   ~  I will fold my wings like a rose today
          and for recovery I will regenerate and enrich
  my mind and improve my thinking  ~ 

  in my meditation-   I hear the drums of my ancestors
       like a heart beating in my soul
          I am reminded of teachings of the grandfathers in the sky
      I will gather their wisdom and insight to life . . . 
                and they tell me that a spiritual quest is needed
      and I know now what I must do . . .  in stillness
  is my rebirth . . .  "a journey"  . . .  in my mind

          ~  yes, I am flawed and have made mistakes
  many times I did the wrong thing and made the wrong decision
        should have . . .  would have to often . . . not stood up for me
                    . . .  but, I forgive me and because of that
   I am transformed  ~

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October 17, 2022


Poetry/Free Verse/metamorphosis
Copyright Protected, ID 10-1495-062-17
All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France

Written for the Premiere contest, ER: Enlightenment
sponsor, Chantelle Anne Cooke, Judged 10/25/2022

Third Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Seeker Avatar
October 29, 2022 at 12:51 AM
A superb write, Constance! Enjoyed from start to finish, congrats on your win!
La France Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 8:26 AM
Seeker, thank you so much for the compliment and the congrats, blessings
Bayles Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 6:42 PM
Very nice poem. I feel strong emotion. You carry a strong feeling throughout the poem. Congratulations on your win.
La France Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 4:21 PM
Mike, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations, blessings
Peck Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 8:59 AM
So beautiful, Constance. If only each of us would do the same. Congratulations on your win!
La France Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 6:16 PM
Ann, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations, blessings
Fowler Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 6:45 AM
This is beautifully written and insightful. Congratulations on your win Constance. :)
La France Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 6:17 PM
Linda, thank you so much for the compliment and the congratulations, blessings
Dutta Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 9:46 PM
Perfect Transcendence to Enlightenment. Wonderful. Congrats to win. Love
La France Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 6:17 PM
Anisha, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats, blessings
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October 19, 2022 at 10:55 AM
Constance, the seed of your poem has bloomed into a wonderful poem filled with innovative, fresh metaphors and a clear picture of your journey into metamorphosis. I am so glad I came back to experience the finished form! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings on your continued journey of metamorphosis!
La France Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 4:35 PM
Sam, thank you so much for the visit, compliment and comment, blessings
Roper Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 8:57 PM
Yes, anchors they are when people are cruel. Great photo, for the verse. Many blessings my friend
La France Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 8:39 AM
Eve, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment. The world is full of cruelty to humans and to animals and nature, my heart is broken every single day, blessings Constance
Kauffman Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 1:29 PM
Blessings as you and your muse create your metamorphosis! Best wishes for the contest. It looks like you have a wonderful start! Blessings my friend!
La France Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 1:55 PM
Sam, thank you so much for the visit and comment, yes muse and I are working today creating this poem, hope you can come back, blessings Constance
Dietrich Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 11:50 AM
I am glad you figured something out for this one, Constance. I actually took it literally and wrote about ER. How is your October going so far? I can't believe how fast it's going. Today I take Joe to his big medical checkup. I am afraid because they may ok him to go back to work, but truly he is not ready. He is dizzy and the concussion effects are still not gone from him.. Wish us luck!
La France Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 1:56 PM
Andrea, thank you so much for the comment, October is going fast, hope Joe's checkup goes well, blessings Constance
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