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Metal Cat Whirly Gig

Dizzy cat
Staggers and spins out of reach...
Birdie laughs mocking

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Caryl Ramsdale

July 30, 2011 at 6:42 PM

Another wonderful Haiku which is one of my favorite poetry forms to create. Have a nice day filled with blessings! Caryl

Poet Destroyer A

May 7, 2011 at 2:25 PM

hope you are doing fine Doris,,, stopping by to wish you a happy mothers day... take care,..p.d.

Anthony O. Mitchell Jr.

April 27, 2011 at 1:19 PM

Ha, enjoyed this!!

Anthony O. Mitchell Jr.

April 27, 2011 at 1:18 PM

Ha, enjoyed this!!

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

April 10, 2011 at 11:13 AM

seems like me funnies are rubbing off on you hehehe

Wilma Neels

April 6, 2011 at 7:03 AM

This is so cute Doris :)

Harry Horsman

April 5, 2011 at 6:54 PM

love this Doris, Harry

Andrea Dietrich

April 4, 2011 at 9:15 PM

love this fun haiku and the picture it creates.

Debbie Guzzi

April 3, 2011 at 2:46 PM

very funny! Light & Love

Michael J. Falotico

April 3, 2011 at 7:35 AM

So cute is this one!!! SO noce to see your name back up here.... Hope your well...luv Michael

Darren Garmer

April 1, 2011 at 8:40 PM

I love this... Just like my cat Ninja :) Thank you for your kind words...

James Foulk

April 1, 2011 at 11:14 AM

very cute little haiku, enjoyed it. thank you for reading my two hearts came together and for your comment

Kash Poet

April 1, 2011 at 7:05 AM

Nice funny Haiku here Doris!Enjoyed--kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 1, 2011 at 6:46 AM

A funny picture indeed Doris.. cool and clever write my friend.. dizzy cat.. I have two that act this way many times.. enjoyed with luv..happy weekend ...hope all is welll luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 1, 2011 at 5:04 AM

Another week has come and gone and I haven't been able to read as much this week as I had wanted. I am glad I was able to read your poetry today Doris. Keep your pen scrolling don't let the ink dry up. I hope you have a wonderful weekend of sunshine and joy and find lots of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

March 31, 2011 at 11:48 PM

Oh,this is such fun, Doris. I can just see the birds laughing at it!

Constance La France

March 31, 2011 at 5:50 PM

Very cute haiku, loved it~~

Timothy Brumley

March 31, 2011 at 4:40 PM

Probably a mocking bird....literally:) I've actually seen this on many occasions, usually when a cat draws too close to the nest. You have Soup Mail!

Robert A. Dufresne

March 31, 2011 at 4:10 PM

unique, Doris so it doesn't look like you need help to be creative. you most certainly already are. Have been extra busy with work etc and it';s also garden time here! so plenty to do. Thanks for the comment and the howdy do!