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Metal Cat Whirly Gig

Dizzy cat Staggers and spins out of reach... Birdie laughs mocking

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/30/2011 6:42:00 PM
Another wonderful Haiku which is one of my favorite poetry forms to create. Have a nice day filled with blessings! Caryl
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Date: 5/7/2011 2:25:00 PM
hope you are doing fine Doris,,, stopping by to wish you a happy mothers day... take care,..p.d.
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Date: 4/27/2011 1:19:00 PM
Ha, enjoyed this!!
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Date: 4/27/2011 1:18:00 PM
Ha, enjoyed this!!
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Date: 4/10/2011 11:13:00 AM
seems like me funnies are rubbing off on you hehehe
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Date: 4/6/2011 7:03:00 AM
This is so cute Doris :)
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Date: 4/5/2011 6:54:00 PM
love this Doris, Harry
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Date: 4/4/2011 9:15:00 PM
love this fun haiku and the picture it creates.
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Date: 4/3/2011 2:46:00 PM
very funny! Light & Love
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Date: 4/3/2011 7:35:00 AM
So cute is this one!!! SO noce to see your name back up here.... Hope your well...luv Michael
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Date: 4/1/2011 8:40:00 PM
I love this... Just like my cat Ninja :) Thank you for your kind words...
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Date: 4/1/2011 11:14:00 AM
very cute little haiku, enjoyed it. thank you for reading my two hearts came together and for your comment
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Date: 4/1/2011 7:05:00 AM
Nice funny Haiku here Doris!Enjoyed--kashinath
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Date: 4/1/2011 6:46:00 AM
A funny picture indeed Doris.. cool and clever write my friend.. dizzy cat.. I have two that act this way many times.. enjoyed with luv..happy weekend ...hope all is welll luv..
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Date: 4/1/2011 5:04:00 AM
Another week has come and gone and I haven't been able to read as much this week as I had wanted. I am glad I was able to read your poetry today Doris. Keep your pen scrolling don't let the ink dry up. I hope you have a wonderful weekend of sunshine and joy and find lots of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/31/2011 11:48:00 PM
Oh,this is such fun, Doris. I can just see the birds laughing at it!
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Date: 3/31/2011 5:50:00 PM
Very cute haiku, loved it~~
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Date: 3/31/2011 4:40:00 PM
Probably a mocking bird....literally:) I've actually seen this on many occasions, usually when a cat draws too close to the nest. You have Soup Mail!
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Date: 3/31/2011 4:10:00 PM
unique, Doris so it doesn't look like you need help to be creative. you most certainly already are. Have been extra busy with work etc and it';s also garden time here! so plenty to do. Thanks for the comment and the howdy do!
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Date: 3/31/2011 3:05:00 PM
A metal cat - that is amusing. How about the birdie? Metal too? I have a bird clock above my sink. Now, I want a metal cat. Love, Dave
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Date: 3/31/2011 2:43:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today and I'm looking forward to reading more. Take care. Dana'lynn
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Date: 3/31/2011 1:08:00 PM
Adding your whimsical poem to my favorites, Doris!
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Date: 3/31/2011 1:02:00 PM
You have shown acute sense of observation in this haiku, Doris. I see after a long absence on PS
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Date: 3/31/2011 12:49:00 PM
That would be funny...Mom..
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Date: 3/31/2011 12:38:00 PM
cute one Doris, made me smile
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