Message of Diligence
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The walls steadily started shutting
Being weak as a rose's petals, our mind
Sudden appearance out of obscurity
Conceded our ability to detect them well
Their tones were previously audible
Fading into transparent background
There was a soothing haze in the corridor
The endwise natural progress forward
Close by siren wailing for our thinking
Putting your fingers toward our ears
It then poised the knife to slash it down
Just before, the last curtain had fallen
Written: November 22, 2022
Copyright © Sotto Poet | Year Posted 2022
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