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The walls steadily started shutting Being weak as a rose's petals, our mind Sudden appearance out of obscurity Conceded our ability to detect them well Their tones were previously audible Fading into transparent background There was a soothing haze in the corridor The endwise natural progress forward Close by siren wailing for our thinking Putting your fingers toward our ears It then poised the knife to slash it down Just before, the last curtain had fallen
Written: November 22, 2022

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Date: 11/24/2022 8:32:00 PM
Though the scene is not quite clear and hazy, it is a soothing haze. Does it convey a foreboding of something or a message of diligence! A very intriguing writing, dear Lasaad !
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Date: 11/22/2022 9:22:00 AM
A powerful and inspiring poem that radiates untold beauty, my friend, Lasaad! Blessings!
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