Line Gauthier Poet Shape

Message In a Bottle

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my darling
you mean
the world
to me how
i adore your
every smile
i love how you
wear your heart
on your sleeve for
you don’t hesitate to
say kind affectionate
words that touch my 
heart because each
comes directly from
the bottom of your 
heart with clarity
genuine integrity
you are my rock
and I cherish you
for all eternity and
unconditionally



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Submitted on November 25, 2018 for contest SHAPE POEM sponsored by EVE ROPER  -  RANKED 2ND

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John Watt March 13, 2020 at 2:27 AM Line, really clever and nicely rendered soda bottle shape for this love poem. Picking all those perfectly sized words to make the shape is a real challenge! Well done ~ John Line Gauthier March 13, 2020 at 8:17 AM Thanks, John. Much appreciated.

Mike Gentile December 17, 2018 at 12:10 PM Congratulations Line, I love your shape, well deserved win xxoo Line Gauthier December 17, 2018 at 6:35 PM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Mike.

Eve Roper December 16, 2018 at 9:30 AM Congratulations on your 2nd place win, Line. I thank you for entering my contest "Shapes". This is an excellent poem with great form and verse of love and emotional feeling. Your welcome to visit my Shape Contest Blog... Happy holidays my friend. Hugs Eve ~`* Line Gauthier December 16, 2018 at 11:35 AM Thanks, Eve, for your most appreciated compliment and ranking. Loved your contest.

Beata Agustin December 16, 2018 at 6:29 AM Congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you. Line Gauthier December 16, 2018 at 11:35 AM Thanks you so much, Beata. Most appreciated.

Jan Allison December 15, 2018 at 6:54 PM beautifully created Line i just gave up and couldn't think of how to do one of these again. many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Line Gauthier December 15, 2018 at 7:52 PM Thanks, Jan, and I can totally understand not coming up with a shape idea... not always as easy as it looks.

Anne-Lise Andresen December 15, 2018 at 4:08 PM - Congratulations on your great shape poem, Line :) - I wish you a peaceful and beautiful Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Line Gauthier December 15, 2018 at 7:52 PM Thank you so much, Sunshine. Most appreciated.

Sara Kendrick December 5, 2018 at 5:25 PM Awesome work. Enjoyed seeing and reading. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara Line Gauthier December 5, 2018 at 8:13 PM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Sara. Much appreciated.

Vegter Papyrus November 29, 2018 at 5:04 AM To be loved is better than money...kind of :) seems that you've been blessed to find that someone. Nice Line Gauthier November 29, 2018 at 9:37 AM Yes. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Vegter.

Timothy Mcguire November 28, 2018 at 4:55 PM Nice poem, nice picture Line Gauthier November 28, 2018 at 8:51 PM Thanks, Timothy, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Warren Doll November 28, 2018 at 2:57 PM Well written and a great shape, Line. Well done. Warm wishes~ Warren Line Gauthier November 28, 2018 at 8:51 PM Thanks, Warren, for your much appreciated visit and compliment.

M. L. Kiser November 27, 2018 at 7:04 PM Beautiful sentiments; lovely picture you've painted. Line Gauthier November 27, 2018 at 9:15 PM Thanks, ML. Mu h appreciated.

Michelle Faulkner November 27, 2018 at 1:23 PM This makes me think of the Coke bottle and 50's diners, well done! Line Gauthier November 27, 2018 at 4:06 PM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Michelle.

Judy Ball November 27, 2018 at 7:02 AM Oh Lovely. A great one for a Valentine card. Love it. God Bless, JB Line Gauthier November 27, 2018 at 7:06 AM So sweet, Judy. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment.

Mike Hauser November 26, 2018 at 3:42 PM Fantastic! I couldn't even begin to do one of these! Line Gauthier November 26, 2018 at 11:23 PM All the more reason to try... surprise yourself, Mike. You can do it!!

Sand Blown November 26, 2018 at 2:11 PM decades ago romance was about a coke at the soda shop lol Line Gauthier November 26, 2018 at 2:44 PM So true, Sand. Thanks for the lovely comment.

Caren Krutsinger November 26, 2018 at 11:01 AM I was thinking this was going to be a poem about a soda pop with a straw, then I read it and thought it is perfect exactly the way it is. Heart-felt, and solidly loving. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Line Gauthier November 26, 2018 at 2:44 PM Surprise! Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren.

Sylvia Coulstock November 26, 2018 at 10:16 AM I love the context of this piece Line, these are beautiful meaningful words and the way you have presented them so so clever. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Line Gauthier November 26, 2018 at 2:45 PM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sylvia.

Constance La France November 26, 2018 at 10:00 AM Line, beautifully penned, your love drips from each word ~ Line Gauthier November 26, 2018 at 2:46 PM So sweet. Thank you, Constance.

Kim Rodrigues November 26, 2018 at 2:08 AM A meaningful poem with lovely sounds. Love the shape! Line Gauthier November 26, 2018 at 7:14 AM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Kim.