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'message In a Bottle - Smile - Wilma'

My words might find you sad and pensive
I am Wilma, please to meet you
Hope that made you smile today
Nothing special to share
I have something else
To give to you
On this page
Is my
Smile


Contest: Message In A Bottle
1st Place

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/8/2011 10:24:00 AM

Congratulations on a well deserved 1st place win Wilma. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 3/8/2011 8:44:00 AM

Wonderful write from you Wilma!Congrats on your 1st place win!!--kashinath

James Fraser

Date: 3/8/2011 5:47:00 AM

This is a lovely self portrait in words about you Wilma, and you do have a lovely smile....:)

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/8/2011 12:39:00 AM

i knew it would do great. Super congratulations for this win dear friend.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/7/2011 4:39:00 PM

What a remarkable take on the contest and very worthy of the high win. Thank you Wilma for always reading and commenting. I am having trouble with my satellite sender and it takes such a long time to get to everyone. Love, Joyce

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 3/7/2011 10:39:00 AM

Hello Wilma, Congratulations on your win! This is written with such a lovely thought.....Love love love this and the ending is perfect..... Love, Shar

Jack Horne

Date: 3/7/2011 7:45:00 AM

Very well deserved win, Wilma, and thanks for your kind words : ) Jack

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/7/2011 7:39:00 AM

Super smiles for you missy ^)^ super congrats & yay for your wonderful win with this smile inducing nonet :D hugs

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/7/2011 12:06:00 AM

Your smile is most important Wilma and so is your kind heart. many congrats for this win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2011 6:38:00 PM

Ahhh, this sweet one made it to the top. Congratulations, Wilma!

John Freeman

Date: 3/6/2011 5:23:00 PM

So great to see you at the top in this one Wilma. Congratulations on your worthy first place honored poem. Agape, Moses

Constance La France

Date: 3/6/2011 4:43:00 PM

Very sweet Wilma, congratulations on your win in the contest~~

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/6/2011 3:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your very, very fine win in Linda's Contest, Wilma. Beautiful! Love, Annalise

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/6/2011 2:09:00 PM

Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Linda, Wilma

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/6/2011 12:53:00 PM

A first for us my love!!! Together at #1.. Im so happy and honored for to be among such great poets... ANd thanks again for the email..luv Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/6/2011 12:05:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on your first place win in my contest .. excellent message luv.. thankxx for your support...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/6/2011 8:57:00 AM

thankxx for supporting my current contest Wilma ..good luck .. will read fully as judging time draws closer ..and that seems soon.. so as not to spoil my fun and enjoyment .. luv..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/6/2011 6:42:00 AM

And that smile is a priceless gift, hey love send that bottle of sunshine my way... Bes of luck my dear sweet luv....love across the big swimming pool that can't hide your heart...love Michael

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/6/2011 5:07:00 AM

that will do for me Wilma, your wonderful comments, poems, and a smile. what else could one wish for. Harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/5/2011 10:18:00 PM

this message fits exactly with the kind of warm wonderful welcoming person you ARE, Wilma. SMILE!!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/5/2011 6:22:00 PM

Thanks for the smile, received the lovely message, Wilma

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/5/2011 3:45:00 PM

Hi Wilma. Forgot to answer about SKYPE. I do use it. Just looking for soupers who'd like to hook-up. Just let me know if you're interested. I've heard that Cape Town is a beautiful place. Have a great weekend. luv Ralph

Jack Horne

Date: 3/5/2011 2:27:00 PM

What a sweet thought! Thanks for your kind words on my tanka, Wilma : ) Jack

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/5/2011 1:28:00 PM

Awesome entry, Wilma. Quite a chuckle. Enjoyed. Good luck. Thanks for your gracious comments. As soon as I write "The Greatest Poem Ever" I'll send a copy to you in SA in a solid gold frame! Do you have SKYPE? What part of SA are you in? luv Ralph