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Mermaid Epitaphs

As heartrose epitaphs swathe earthly echoes with swelled up w a v e s of spiritual sirens, sea-fairies collide with honeysuckle footprints, traced by mint-green manta rays along aquatic vessel of karma, pumping a nascent wilderness. In shawls of raven wind, my silhouette is a blood moon, mirrored in mermaid's emerald eyes 'neath dove grey midnight, flowering from skulls like love's last smoke, as sciaphilic pulse evaporates ~ and rusty rains of remorse remain. Grieving wanderlust waltzes in my metallic burgundy veins, as butterfly oracles flip and seraph's saga swirls in a torrential topaz turmoil, inscribing truths midst ignited bohemian serenades. Winding moonlight around fingertips, ivory threads of harp dance in fluid palms as liquid sun, floating in dew, melts upon titanium tentacles of wisteria archangels. When water hymns hibernate in silence and marine prayers s u r f in surging eagle blades, I pirouette as an amethyst-opal whisper of wound in white-washed warrior skin, for, every crimson corpse is a thumping cyclone, burning within sienna sand. Ancient memoirs cascade like tea-lime a s h drops, upon shipwrecked lotus leaves where the third eye slumbers in talisman petals, and heartbeats bubble up as breaths of a windswept vagabond. So, in fears of ruby-fire r a i n, I'm forlorn and found, my soul chakra is sewn with stelliferous canopies, and within dolphin lullabies, jeweled life gently sways. Homing perfumed stars in tulip temple, I'm Athena's spirit~ a wildflower d a w n, fading beneath samurai cloak of caramel flakes, unfurled from pistachio sepals, my honey pink aura cradles tiger-lily sunbeams upon eyelashes, as f a t e flutters... in timeless, watercolor wisps.

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Date: 4/30/2024 3:31:00 PM
You have a way with words. Your poem is beautiful
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Date: 4/19/2024 5:22:00 PM
Having been fascinated by mermaids since I was a child, the title grabbed my attention right away. And, I found your poem to be just as captivating with it's wondrous imagery... Keep up the great writing!
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Date: 4/9/2024 6:20:00 PM
Welcome back, Hiya dear and warmest congratulations on your podium finish with this outstanding masterpiece
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Date: 4/9/2024 4:45:00 PM
Your poem was elegant at every turn, dear Hiya. The way you described the cycle of life and death was captivating. I especially liked "samurai cloak of carmel flakes" What lovely imagery throughout your poem. Glad you're back. Missed you, hugs, Sara
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Date: 4/9/2024 6:35:00 AM
Excellent writing Hiya. Outstanding lines! Also the mint-green mentioned, is striking. Well done :)
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Date: 4/8/2024 6:46:00 PM
It almost seems astral, this writing of yours- like I am on some journey of beauty. A real pleasure to read
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Date: 4/8/2024 5:35:00 PM
Very descriptive lines penned in this one. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
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Date: 4/8/2024 2:43:00 PM
Welcome back, Hiya. I'm delighted to see you again. I eagerly await your return, as I yearn to once again be captivated by the depth and elegance of your poetry. The eloquence and artistry of your words never cease to captivate and inspire. As I peruse this latest piece, I am captivated by the profound and contemplative examination of sorrow, change, and the resilient essence that permeates its lines. The delicate transition of the sciaphilic pulse into remorse adds a poignant and heart-wrenching layer to the already profound emotions expressed. The way you skillfully depict the perpetual cycle of life and death is truly impressive. Hi there, this is an incredibly impactful and emotionally stirring piece. Your talent is truly exceptional and deserves to be recognized and celebrated. Thank you for sharing it with the world.
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Date: 4/8/2024 11:31:00 AM
Welcome back, Hiya. Missed reading your articulate poetry-- adorned as always in your poetic prowess. Splendid diction throughout in superb metaphors.--In shawls of raven wind, my silhouette is a blood moon, mirrored in mermaid's emerald eyes 'neath dove grey midnight--- Ancient memoirs cascade like tea-lime a s h drops, upon shipwrecked lotus leaves where the third eye slumbers in talisman petals---I'm Athena's spirit~ a wildflower d a w n---Awesome! A FAVE!!
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Date: 4/8/2024 11:09:00 AM
"Winding moonlight around fingertips, ivory threads of harp dance in fluid palms as liquid sun" Really beautiful imagery! "my honey pink aura cradles tiger-lily sunbeams upon eyelashes, as f a t e flutters... in timeless, watercolor wisps. " Very eloquent poem. Well done!
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Date: 4/8/2024 10:39:00 AM
Dear Hiya, what a breathtaking menagerie of emotions. The imagery is so beautiful that I can practically feel the ocean spray and hear the mournful song of the sirens. I love how it's a beautiful exploration of grief, transformation, and the enduring spirit. The sciaphilic pulse fading into remorse is a particularly poignant touch. The cyclical nature of life and death is so eloquently captured. Hiya, it is such a powerful piece! - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 4/8/2024 8:16:00 AM
Welcome back Hiya.. You have been missed.. Your poem is rich with sensory imagery that transports the reader to a surreal and ethereal realm. It paints scenes of nature, mythology, and introspection with vivid detail, utilizing metaphors and symbols to evoke a sense of wonder and mystery. Beneath the surface of its enchanting imagery lies a profound exploration of human emotions and experiences. Themes of longing, grief, acceptance, and transformation resonate throughout the poem..
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Date: 4/8/2024 7:56:00 AM
Gosh my angelic star, its so good to read something that touches my soul metaphorically with such eloquent embellishments that truly is captivating in a long time! Iv missed having you here and wow mermaid epitaphs! What a title! I wish i came up with that, its so good! And i love so many lines here but have to highlight how creatively artistically youv woven alliterations and painted imagery , that is so deeply meaningful, whilst phrasing thoughts on karma and so much more as third eye slumbers left me in awe inspired! I especially love the ending and also how you’ve used oceanic diction that goes so well with the mermaid theme youv gone for! Impeccable write it is! Pleasure having you back and reading this! This is easily a fave for me! Sending you light today and always.
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