Mermaid Epitaphs

  As heartrose epitaphs
swathe earthly echoes
   with swelled up  w a v e s
  of spiritual sirens,
sea-fairies collide
  with honeysuckle footprints,
traced by mint-green manta rays
  along aquatic vessel of karma,
 pumping a nascent wilderness. 

In shawls of raven wind, 
  my silhouette is a blood moon, 
mirrored in mermaid's emerald eyes
   'neath dove grey midnight, 
flowering from skulls
   like love's last smoke, 
 as sciaphilic pulse evaporates ~
 and rusty rains of remorse remain.
 Grieving wanderlust
   waltzes in my
  metallic burgundy veins, 
 as butterfly oracles flip 
  and seraph's saga
  swirls in a torrential topaz turmoil, 
 inscribing truths midst
 ignited bohemian serenades. 

Winding moonlight
     around fingertips,
ivory threads of harp
 dance in fluid palms
    as liquid sun, floating in dew,
 melts upon titanium tentacles
   of wisteria archangels. 
When water hymns
     hibernate in silence
  and marine prayers
 s u r f in surging eagle blades,
    I pirouette as 
  an amethyst-opal whisper of wound
     in white-washed warrior skin,
for, every crimson corpse
  is a thumping cyclone,
  burning within sienna sand. 

 Ancient memoirs
cascade like
  tea-lime a s h drops,
upon shipwrecked lotus leaves
 where the third eye slumbers
   in talisman petals,
 and heartbeats bubble up
 as breaths of a
 windswept vagabond. 
So, in fears of ruby-fire r a i n,
  I'm forlorn and found,
 my soul chakra is sewn
   with stelliferous canopies,
and within dolphin lullabies,
  jeweled life gently sways. 

 Homing perfumed stars
   in tulip temple,
I'm Athena's spirit~
 a wildflower d a w n,
fading beneath
  samurai cloak of
      caramel flakes,
unfurled from pistachio sepals,
  my honey pink aura
cradles tiger-lily sunbeams 
      upon eyelashes,
as f a t e flutters...
       in timeless,
                watercolor wisps.
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Kingston Avatar
May 26, 2024 at 5:17 PM
What a magical piece of writing with so much marvelous imagery. My favorite line (although hard to decide) was: "and within dolphin lullabies, jeweled life gently sways" I think this poem would make a beautiful song! I'm so glad to have come across it. :)
Swan Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 4:56 AM
Loved: this, especially : wildflower dawn, winding moonlight around fingertips, sunbeams on eyelashes. Looking forward to your next poem too. J :)
Croft Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 3:31 PM
You have a way with words. Your poem is beautiful
Deschler Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 5:22 PM
Having been fascinated by mermaids since I was a child, the title grabbed my attention right away. And, I found your poem to be just as captivating with it's wondrous imagery... Keep up the great writing!
Seeker Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 6:20 PM
Welcome back, Hiya dear and warmest congratulations on your podium finish with this outstanding masterpiece
Sands Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 6:35 AM
Excellent writing Hiya. Outstanding lines! Also the mint-green mentioned, is striking. Well done :)
Hind Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 6:46 PM
It almost seems astral, this writing of yours- like I am on some journey of beauty. A real pleasure to read
Kendrick Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 5:35 PM
Very descriptive lines penned in this one. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
Poet Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 2:43 PM
Welcome back, Hiya. I'm delighted to see you again. I eagerly await your return, as I yearn to once again be captivated by the depth and elegance of your poetry. The eloquence and artistry of your words never cease to captivate and inspire. As I peruse this latest piece, I am captivated by the profound and contemplative examination of sorrow, change, and the resilient essence that permeates its lines. The delicate transition of the sciaphilic pulse into remorse adds a poignant and heart-wrenching layer to the already profound emotions expressed. The way you skillfully depict the perpetual cycle of life and death is truly impressive. Hi there, this is an incredibly impactful and emotionally stirring piece. Your talent is truly exceptional and deserves to be recognized and celebrated. Thank you for sharing it with the world.
Pandit Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 11:31 AM
Welcome back, Hiya. Missed reading your articulate poetry-- adorned as always in your poetic prowess. Splendid diction throughout in superb metaphors.--In shawls of raven wind, my silhouette is a blood moon, mirrored in mermaid's emerald eyes 'neath dove grey midnight--- Ancient memoirs cascade like tea-lime a s h drops, upon shipwrecked lotus leaves where the third eye slumbers in talisman petals---I'm Athena's spirit~ a wildflower d a w n---Awesome! A FAVE!!
DiMino Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 11:09 AM
"Winding moonlight around fingertips, ivory threads of harp dance in fluid palms as liquid sun" Really beautiful imagery! "my honey pink aura cradles tiger-lily sunbeams upon eyelashes, as f a t e flutters... in timeless, watercolor wisps. " Very eloquent poem. Well done!
Rodgers Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 10:39 AM
Dear Hiya, what a breathtaking menagerie of emotions. The imagery is so beautiful that I can practically feel the ocean spray and hear the mournful song of the sirens. I love how it's a beautiful exploration of grief, transformation, and the enduring spirit. The sciaphilic pulse fading into remorse is a particularly poignant touch. The cyclical nature of life and death is so eloquently captured. Hiya, it is such a powerful piece! - Blessings, Daniel
One Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 8:16 AM
Welcome back Hiya.. You have been missed.. Your poem is rich with sensory imagery that transports the reader to a surreal and ethereal realm. It paints scenes of nature, mythology, and introspection with vivid detail, utilizing metaphors and symbols to evoke a sense of wonder and mystery. Beneath the surface of its enchanting imagery lies a profound exploration of human emotions and experiences. Themes of longing, grief, acceptance, and transformation resonate throughout the poem..
Empress Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 7:56 AM
Gosh my angelic star, its so good to read something that touches my soul metaphorically with such eloquent embellishments that truly is captivating in a long time! Iv missed having you here and wow mermaid epitaphs! What a title! I wish i came up with that, its so good! And i love so many lines here but have to highlight how creatively artistically youv woven alliterations and painted imagery , that is so deeply meaningful, whilst phrasing thoughts on karma and so much more as third eye slumbers left me in awe inspired! I especially love the ending and also how you’ve used oceanic diction that goes so well with the mermaid theme youv gone for! Impeccable write it is! Pleasure having you back and reading this! This is easily a fave for me! Sending you light today and always.
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