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'merger of Hearts'

adulation our banner

red little hearts and ribbons 

a carnival of our love 

a merger of hearts 


Contest : Red
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Carol Sunshine Brown

February 22, 2011 at 12:00 PM

Congratulations Wilma, on your win in Francine Robert's contest "Red". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

February 5, 2011 at 10:20 AM

Wilma, I would have liked seeing this one higher. It is a wonderfully clever little dodoitsu. congrats. Luv, Andrea

Diane Locksley

February 4, 2011 at 5:36 PM

Really nice Wilma! We sometimes need adulation from our partners. Congratulations on your success in the contest.

Joyce Johnson

February 4, 2011 at 5:34 PM

Very nice Wilma. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Robert Pettit

February 4, 2011 at 5:26 PM

Wilma, congratulations on your win. You have great descriptiveness in this entry.

Kory Calhoun

February 4, 2011 at 3:46 PM

I know I'm eventually gonna get into trouble with my comments but...this should've been in the Top 3. "adulation our banner"... Beautifully written. Congratulations on your great WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC

Kash Poet

February 4, 2011 at 1:59 PM

Ccngrats Wilma on your well deserved win in this contest of Francine!--kashinath

Sharon Ruebel

February 4, 2011 at 11:11 AM

Hello Wilma, Just stopping by to wish you well and Congratulate you on your wonderful win! Very well done, I like this one As Always, Shar

Carolyn Devonshire

February 4, 2011 at 10:52 AM

Sorry I missed this one earlier, Wilma. Love does seem like a "carnival" to me and I'm wearing the clown suit. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

James Fraser

February 4, 2011 at 10:10 AM

I love it Wilma, it's sweet, cute and adorable. Congrats on your win in the contest....:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 4, 2011 at 8:22 AM

Congrats Wilma on your HM in the RED contest with this exciting entry my dear friend.. enjoy your very special honor with luv... awesome..

Tahera Mannan

February 4, 2011 at 6:58 AM

Many congratulations for this success.

John Freeman

February 4, 2011 at 6:56 AM

Congrtulations Wilma on your success in Francines, inspiring contest. Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud

February 4, 2011 at 1:45 AM

ohh wilma... a tender priece that flows with warmth! congrats on your win in the contest! :) huggs, nette

Francine Roberts

February 3, 2011 at 11:40 PM

congrats on your Honorable Mention in my contest Wilma, and thank you for your support

Michael J. Falotico

February 3, 2011 at 2:03 PM

So nice and romantic my dear, love the thoughts around this piece....luv Michael

Andrea Dietrich

February 2, 2011 at 11:25 PM

this has such cute lines. A carnival of our love.I just love carnivals!Nice seeing you here tonight.I think I will get off here now! Time for some beddie bye.LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 2, 2011 at 3:37 PM

Lovely merge Wilma and those red little hearts are so romanic on ribbons... a true carnival romantic atmosphere in your lines..good luck in the contest luv..

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