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Mere Echo of Nature

By the water's edge mid quiet heaven, Autumns azure sky golden honey rays through wavering leaves Mother Nature's quenching heartbeat unfurls a crest of blaze colour Single leaf drops making ripples spread drifting beyond rest. 2/2/2020

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Date: 2/4/2020 6:54:00 PM
beautiful Eve...such vivid imagery... love it... congrats on your top win :) hugs
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Date: 2/4/2020 4:18:00 AM
Eve amazing my friend! Congrats on your top win!;) I knew it would!;)
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Date: 2/3/2020 11:00:00 PM
Nice imagery. I began this form once, but had difficulty with it and never finished. Yours turned out beautiful.
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Date: 2/3/2020 7:06:00 PM
What an exquisite write laced with so many beautiful images. Wonderful penning Eve :) hugs
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Date: 2/3/2020 5:28:00 PM
This is gorgeous Eve! It makes me long for autumn colors again. xxoo
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Date: 2/3/2020 3:51:00 PM
Such gorgeous autumnal imagery eve:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/3/2020 4:26:00 AM
Drifting beyond indeed ...
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Date: 2/3/2020 12:37:00 AM
Love how this moves from the expansive to focus down upon that single leaf. Precious penning, Eve! :) Gershon
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Date: 2/2/2020 11:31:00 PM
Mother nature's beauty competing with poetic beauty..
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Date: 2/2/2020 9:12:00 PM
Lovely poem, Eve.
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Date: 2/2/2020 8:03:00 PM
Your poetry is light a feather today. I want to fly to where you are right here, xo
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/2/2020 8:09:00 PM
thank you sweet lady

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