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Cold and sodden The rain fell heavy in the night As if his sins were known to the sky gods And, in mercy, sought to wash them off his spirit He knelt down by the old Cheyenne chief Eyes softly lit by the kerosene lantern he held "Our crimes against your people are beyond forgiveness," he said Struggling through the chief's native tongue The ailing chief looked up at him, a furrow in his brow "I was a good soldier," the calvalry officer continued, "it was my job" Tears streaming, though the chief could not tell in such a downpour Unsheathing his knife, he cut the old man's restraints "In your next world," he added, "say a prayer for us ... for the white man" "We have wronged you so," hanging his head in shame The old chief placed a weathered hand tenderly on the officer's shoulder Rose to his feet, and walked slowly off into the night Carrying a heaviness beyond that of the storm ... A single gun shot in the distance confirmed his troubled heart He stopped briefly to say a prayer for the soldier's spirit Thought of his woman's smile ... and headed home. ~ 3rd Place ~ in the "Contest 600, Any Free Verse, Up To A Max Of 20 Lines" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 6/1/2019 7:32:00 PM
Your poem is as enthralling as it is intense, Gregory. I was completely captivated by the imagery and emotions. This piece is a tragic beauty whose last stanza is truly stunning. Congratulations on your excellent win, my friend.. ~Susan
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/1/2019 7:51:00 PM
What a wonderful comment, Susan, and such heartfelt sentiment ... these thoughtfully kind words made my day, (and a rather rough day at that). Thank you so very much, Dear Poet! :-) <3
Date: 5/30/2019 5:31:00 PM
Oh, this is perfect. Congrats, Gregory)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/1/2019 7:50:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kurt, I appreciate it, my friend! :-)
Date: 5/30/2019 3:10:00 PM
A splendid, moving write, Greg:-) Heartiest congratulations on your well-deserved win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/1/2019 7:49:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Edward, I'm pleased you liked it, friend! :-)
Date: 4/15/2019 12:43:00 AM
This is so heart-felt and poignant, also seems like it comes straight from the Old Chief's memories. Well done indeed, a simplicity to it that speaks of the way I would think an Old Chief would think.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/18/2019 6:20:00 AM
Many kind thanks to you, Caren, for this sweet and heartfelt comment - I'm so happy that you enjoyed m,y poem! Blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 4/13/2019 6:57:00 PM
I grew up in the West, and I love Indian stories. This was so sensitive. I love it.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 4/14/2019 10:45:00 AM
You are so right about Ancient Embers, Greg. I read it and faved it.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/14/2019 2:03:00 AM
That means a lot to me, Sunlite, and I thank you so very much for the special words of encouragement. I have loved the Old West since I could walk. In fact, when my mother was leaving the hospital with me after I was born, she rode in the elevator with Gene Autry, who was visiting the hospital in Portland, (Maine), so I was meant to enjoy it, I think. I have another poem called "Ancient Embers" that you might like. Blessings! :-) <3
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/14/2019 2:03:00 AM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/ancient_embers_1065002
Date: 4/13/2019 11:32:00 AM
Beautiful poem. I have added this to my fav list. Well done. Have a great day.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/14/2019 1:56:00 AM
Thank you so very much, David, I greatly appreciate the kind comments ... you have a wonderful weekend, my friend! :-)

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