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Memory of Youth

romantic music played on his car radio . . . his smooth kisses melted me all of a sudden occurred the strange invasion of his tongue inside my mouth Nov. 1, 2020 for nette onclaud's 'SPIN A SEDOKA' Poetry Contest Theme: Memory of Youth

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Date: 11/15/2020 11:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! I remembered those kisses! Brilliant writing my dear friend. Love Chantelle
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Date: 11/6/2020 3:10:00 AM
A shock for a young girl for sure and some old women. Enjoyed reading your contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara..Oh!! I see you won. Awesome.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/6/2020 7:08:00 PM
that is so funny to imagine it being the first time for an old lady. that would be a rare thing!
Date: 11/5/2020 4:12:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in Nette's Sedoka contest with this excellent poem, the line "his smooth kisses melted me" is lovely _Constance
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Date: 11/4/2020 6:00:00 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea... hugs... ~ Ani :)
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Date: 11/4/2020 3:43:00 PM
Such a passionate sedoka dear Andrea...Congratulations on your win!!!
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Date: 11/4/2020 10:46:00 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea, a look into the past, a first kiss, revelation! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/4/2020 9:50:00 AM
Congrats on your Sedoka win, my friend ~ John
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Date: 11/3/2020 4:19:00 AM
Shocking? Yes it surely was. Thanks for the memory.
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Date: 11/2/2020 7:37:00 AM
Andrea, A moment captured in youth. Like a fine painting by Chagall or Renoir. -Richard
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Date: 11/2/2020 12:58:00 AM
Good thing there was no virus around in those days. ~~
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Date: 11/1/2020 8:34:00 PM
Sounds like that first episode of 'tonsil hockey' was quite a shock to the system... one you still haven't gotten over. Well done, good luck
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/2/2020 6:45:00 AM
of course I got over it. It's guys' preferred way to kiss!
Date: 11/1/2020 4:51:00 PM
I see the climactic scene of a lovely romance, Andrea!!
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Date: 11/1/2020 3:44:00 PM
Ah! To be young. That was a long time ago. Well penned. Stay well my friend.
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Date: 11/1/2020 12:26:00 PM
WoW!Andrea, This is a good entry for the contest theme. Romance at best, in a few words.I could just pictures the scene perfectly. Best wishes in the contest. PS, I tried to write one using the same theme, I removed because it didn’t make sense.Have a wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis
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Alexis Y.
Date: 11/1/2020 5:27:00 PM
I understand now. It was two different guys:-)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/1/2020 5:13:00 PM
So to make my reply understandable, it was a different guy who slobbered. You got it right, Alexis, this one merely started french kissing. He was not a slobberer, thank heavens.
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Alexis Y.
Date: 11/1/2020 2:47:00 PM
When I read it , my mind didn’t picture slobber. I saw a nice passionate kiss. I guess it’s the hopeless romantic in me. :-)Alexis
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/1/2020 12:29:00 PM
you really think so? I can't believe this thought came to another woman. I guess I am not so alone as I thought with this one. It's really bad when the guy slobbers. ugggg.
Date: 11/1/2020 11:28:00 AM
A night to remember Andrea, you never forget those encounters. Good luck Tom
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/1/2020 12:18:00 PM
it was the best of times. It was the worst of times. hahaha. I was pretty innocent then about french kissing!