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Memory of Youth

romantic music
played on his car radio . . .
his smooth kisses melted me

all of a sudden
occurred the strange invasion
of his tongue inside my mouth


Nov. 1, 2020
for nette onclaud's 'SPIN A SEDOKA' Poetry Contest
Theme: Memory of Youth

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/6/2020 3:10:00 AM

A shock for a young girl for sure and some old women. Enjoyed reading your contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara..Oh!! I see you won. Awesome.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/6/2020 7:08:00 PM

that is so funny to imagine it being the first time for an old lady. that would be a rare thing!

Constance La France

Date: 11/5/2020 4:12:00 AM

Andrea, congratulations on your win in Nette's Sedoka contest with this excellent poem, the line "his smooth kisses melted me" is lovely _Constance

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 11/4/2020 6:00:00 PM

Congrats on your win Andrea... hugs... ~ Ani :)

JCB Brul

Date: 11/4/2020 3:43:00 PM

Such a passionate sedoka dear Andrea...Congratulations on your win!!!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/4/2020 10:46:00 AM

Congrats on your win Andrea, a look into the past, a first kiss, revelation! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

John Watt

Date: 11/4/2020 9:50:00 AM

Congrats on your Sedoka win, my friend ~ John

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/3/2020 4:19:00 AM

Shocking? Yes it surely was. Thanks for the memory.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 11/2/2020 7:37:00 AM

Andrea, A moment captured in youth. Like a fine painting by Chagall or Renoir. -Richard

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/2/2020 12:58:00 AM

Good thing there was no virus around in those days. ~~

John Watt

Date: 11/1/2020 8:34:00 PM

Sounds like that first episode of 'tonsil hockey' was quite a shock to the system... one you still haven't gotten over. Well done, good luck

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/2/2020 6:45:00 AM

of course I got over it. It's guys' preferred way to kiss!

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 11/1/2020 4:51:00 PM

I see the climactic scene of a lovely romance, Andrea!!

David Mchattie

Date: 11/1/2020 3:44:00 PM

Ah! To be young. That was a long time ago. Well penned. Stay well my friend.

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/1/2020 12:26:00 PM

WoW!Andrea, This is a good entry for the contest theme. Romance at best, in a few words.I could just pictures the scene perfectly. Best wishes in the contest. PS, I tried to write one using the same theme, I removed because it didn’t make sense.Have a wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/1/2020 5:27:00 PM

I understand now. It was two different guys:-)

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/1/2020 5:13:00 PM

So to make my reply understandable, it was a different guy who slobbered. You got it right, Alexis, this one merely started french kissing. He was not a slobberer, thank heavens.

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/1/2020 2:47:00 PM

When I read it , my mind didn’t picture slobber. I saw a nice passionate kiss. I guess it’s the hopeless romantic in me. :-)Alexis

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/1/2020 12:29:00 PM

you really think so? I can't believe this thought came to another woman. I guess I am not so alone as I thought with this one. It's really bad when the guy slobbers. ugggg.