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I treasure the memories of your guidance, Your gentle advice, always aware of my feelings. You took the place in my heart of my absent father. You always said I was the daughter you never had but always longed for, and you were the father I wanted. You taught me the importance of casting my vote As I became eligible to vote, so many years ago. I learned about finances from your successful endeavors, How to make the most of the money I earned, how to save. Your encouragement and love helped me seek my goals To attain the lofty career of my choice through diligent work. I glowed with pride as you walked me down the aisle. Your integrity, loyalty and faithfulness was a shining example Of the kind of person I wanted to pattern my life after. I know the angels sent you to me in answer to my prayers. You have passed on many years ago, yet I still revere your Presence in my life every day because your spirit lives on And I speak to you as you continue to guide me. You would be 100 this year, and I celebrate your lasting love. Dec. 9, 2019 ~Third Place Premier Contest~ Memorial of a Loved One Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 2/10/2020 1:17:00 AM
This is obviously a poetic tribute very personal to yourself, Connie...I can tell at a glance just how incredibly important this very special person is to you; suffice to say that this really is a most wonderful portrait of a most wonderful soul. Beautifully contrived...it truly is lovely writing. My warmest and most heartfelt regards. Your friend. :) john
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/10/2020 3:06:00 PM
He was the father I never had. I admired him so much I made sure all of my children were born near his birth date. All three were born two days apart in the first week of November. I feel as though he has never left me. Thank you for such I lovely insightful comment John. xxoo
Date: 12/27/2019 6:09:00 AM
This is a beautiful tribute Connie. It is a great blessing to have someone in your life who loves and cares for you so dearly, and for him to have had someone to care for who appreciated such tender, nurturing guidance. Have a great New Year my friend.
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Date: 12/25/2019 11:03:00 AM
Lovely tribute, Connie. Merry Christmas! Best wishes to you and your loved ones for 2020.
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Date: 12/14/2019 4:43:00 PM
Congrats for your well-deserved win but not only that, it is a great tribute. Great to hear from you and many thanks for your kind comment re the disgruntled Santa. Merry Christmas to you and your family and enjoy the climate of HI - lots of snow here in Colorado and more on the way. Bob
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Date: 12/14/2019 10:14:00 AM
Connie, so glad you won! Panagiota
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Date: 12/14/2019 2:06:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem Connie
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Date: 12/12/2019 7:47:00 PM
wow, Connie, one of the best tributes I have read today. To think, he would have been 100 today!!
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Date: 12/12/2019 4:04:00 PM
Connie, this is such a beautiful tribute to a wonderful person in your life. My heart was touched by your words. Merry Christmas my friend. Hugs, John
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Date: 12/12/2019 2:12:00 PM
This was absolutely heart touching Connie. I smiled all the way through this wonderful tribute for someone who seemed to be everything to you. I loved this and don;t know how I missed it.
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Date: 12/12/2019 1:18:00 PM
Oh what lovely sincere words, Connie! What lovely memories! What a tribute to somebody who stepped in to guide you through life! I'm touched. ~ Warm regards // paul
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/12/2019 1:42:00 PM
Thank you so much Paul. I had just turned sixteen when he came into my life. He was a Scorpio which is why I made sure all my children were born as close as possible to his birthday. They were all born the first week of November. Mele Kalikimaka! xxoo
Date: 12/12/2019 3:39:00 AM
Ah, he sounds wonderful and I am so glad you had each other in your life. One hundred this year! Wow!
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Date: 12/10/2019 5:53:00 PM
Hello Connie … This verse brings back personal memories for most readers I imagine. The older we get, the more memories we gather that will never leave us - thank you once again Connie - Lindsay
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Date: 12/10/2019 10:45:00 AM
such a beautiful heartfelt tribute Connie... love this one...best wishes in the contest this poem is exquisite my friend :) hugs
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Date: 12/9/2019 3:31:00 PM
Although written for a contest, one could not ask for a more eloquent eulogy! Well done, Connie! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 12/9/2019 2:10:00 PM
Very touching and beautifully expressed, Connie! You were lucky to have such a person in your life...
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Date: 12/9/2019 1:55:00 PM
Heartfelt write Connie--I can feel that you treasure his memories--and all that you learned and enjoyed together as a family. No substitute for such love, as you so eloquently express in this poem. All the best.
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Date: 12/9/2019 1:50:00 PM
How wonderful and fortunate you were to have had someone to guide you along many paths in life, Connie. Well wishes for a winning placement.
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Date: 12/9/2019 1:45:00 PM
How beautiful a tribute to one who loved and guided you Connie! His touch on your life is obvious in your poems. He still is alive in your words. Panagiota
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