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Memories of the Past Present Before My Eyes

my daughter’s inside OshKosh B’gosh purple overalls. “i’ve got pockets. do you have pockets?” she asks her friend on a Pearl City sidewalk. i’ll tell you what — i’ve got deep pockets for my dear eldest daughter. so sweet son, i was a princess for one; who’d open doors, lean back in a chair, declare with an empty wallet, “get anything you want, ma.” anything — anything for you darling son. saw herself as too shy but the neighbor declared, “oh no, she’s not shy at all,” as she sold candy for a school fundraiser. my daughter declares loudly — with her precious soul, the love of the Lord. i incline my ear to my dear youngest. My love for all three, in order, or shuffled like cards. Just like the jumble of memories that come to mind. 7/2/2020

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Date: 7/3/2020 6:14:00 AM
Three children, all with a totally different relationship to their loving mother - made a terrific poem, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/3/2020 7:26:00 AM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 7/2/2020 8:11:00 PM
I feel your joy for all of them...it out pours here...Nice one
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/3/2020 7:27:00 AM
Thank you, Arturo!
Date: 7/2/2020 6:38:00 PM
Kids! Can't get enough of 'em! Smiles, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/3/2020 7:27:00 AM
Truly! They are a blessing!
Date: 7/2/2020 4:09:00 PM
I feel the happiness in voice of your poem--a treasure to behold such memories, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2020 4:16:00 PM
<3 Vijay! Memories are precious!
Date: 7/2/2020 2:47:00 PM
So fortunate to have three children! Can't imagine that joy, one _ is terrific! But three memoris ongoing! Awesome. Great verse, Kim. Pangie xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2020 4:16:00 PM
Thank you! It is wonderful!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2020 4:16:00 PM
Thank you! It is wonderful!
Date: 7/2/2020 2:14:00 PM
Memories like diamonds, are forever dearest, Kim and memories of our children are more precious than diamonds. Blessings my friend. Hugs xxx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2020 4:17:00 PM
They are! Thank you, my friend!

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