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Memories In the Snow

tablets of stone inscribed with wrought names ~ I evoke the dead in Winter’s silence 10/6/2020 Contest: Writing Challenge - Septolet Form Sponsor: Constance La France<\center>

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Constance La France

Date: 10/11/2020 6:37:00 AM

Kim, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge- Septolet with this excellent poem, a FAV for me _Constance

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2020 7:23:00 AM

Thanks so much, Constance! A great form to write in! xx

Anisha Dutta

Date: 10/11/2020 4:35:00 AM

You have used the lines in an interesting way. I admire. Most suitable approach on your theme. Congrats to win. Love.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2020 7:24:00 AM

Thank you, Anisha! Hugs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/10/2020 5:34:00 PM

so interesting how you did long lines of the 14 words. Great message. Congrats

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/10/2020 5:42:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea! This just gave me more the feel of a tombstone

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/10/2020 1:07:00 PM

- Back with congratulations ... no surprise, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/10/2020 2:08:00 PM

Thanks, Anne-Lise!

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 10/10/2020 12:54:00 PM

Congratulations, Kim, on your win for this great paint that evokes dead silence!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/10/2020 2:08:00 PM

Thank you, Newton!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/6/2020 12:21:00 PM

Few people visited the poor departed. ~~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/6/2020 11:33:00 AM

- Woow, Kim ... excellent written ... -Congratulations on your top winning poem ... I have no doubt :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2020 5:09:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise,

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/6/2020 8:03:00 AM

You've captured the hush of place and season with the mystique of your wondrous imagery, Kim. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2020 5:02:00 PM

Thank you, Susan!