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MEMORIES AND GHOSTS

MEMORIES AND GHOSTS
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Memories flicker like fireflies,*
each one a tiny spark,
lighting the shadows of my mind—
the laughter of family,
the warmth of a lover’s embrace,
the bittersweet taste of farewells.

They hover just beyond reach,
fading like a ghost, 
yet vivid, like the last notes of a song
lingering in the air.

*Note: The phrase 'memories flicker like fireflies' is a common phrase used in poetry and literature. It's not my original phrase. Giving credit where credit's due.

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Beryl Edmonds Date: 8/11/2025 12:12:00 AM Lovely Sara, some memories stay in our hearts forever, though some we’d rather forget… Beryl Login to Reply Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 8/11/2025 5:29:00 PM I, too, have some memories I'd like to forget...I suppose we all do. Anyway, thanks for visiting and comment, hugs, Sara

Victor Buhagiar Date: 8/10/2025 2:25:00 AM We all borrow some quote in our poems, but only a line or two. I think that's acceptable. Login to Reply Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 8/10/2025 4:44:00 PM thanks, Victor. Appreciate your words. Have a great week ahead, Sara

Eileen Manassian Date: 8/9/2025 11:34:00 PM The last notes of a song bring a wave of nostalgia. This was full of feeling and beauty. Great write. Thanks for your visit to my page. Login to Reply Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 8/10/2025 4:44:00 PM thanks, Eileen, for visiting and for your thoughtful comments about my poem. I appreciate you and your visits...enjoy your week ahead, Sara

Anne Winter Date: 8/9/2025 9:44:00 PM Dear Sara, good memories are like Christmas cookies and hot chocolate, nostalgic and beautiful. Your poem is beautiful and beautifully written! Best, Anne Login to Reply Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 8/10/2025 4:43:00 PM thank you, sweet Anne, for your 'delicious' comments. I appreciate them. I value memories...have been a memoirist for years having only begun writing poetry a couple of years ago. Rambling...wishing you a pleasant week ahead, hugs, Sara

David Crandall Date: 8/9/2025 9:13:00 AM Great description of memories - your just beyond reach, sometimes you can catch them, sometimes they slip away! Login to Reply Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 8/9/2025 5:55:00 PM true, memories do sometimes slip away...boo hiss when that happens. Thanks for stopping by, David!

Joe Dimino Date: 8/9/2025 6:39:00 AM Memories are not always pleasant, I know what you mean -- but they are all foundations for tomorrow...hopefully we choose the best, and make even new valleys more lush with blossoms. Great poetry! Login to Reply Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 8/9/2025 5:54:00 PM thanks for your visit and your insightful comments. You're always so encouraging...and I'm grateful. Have a great weekend, Sara

Chetta Achara Date: 8/9/2025 6:32:00 AM Beautiful! Login to Reply Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 8/9/2025 5:54:00 PM many thanks! :-)

Valsa George Date: 8/9/2025 6:04:00 AM Memories are like the sparks of a firefly. They flash and fade out quickly, bringing to mind sweet and sour remembrances. Lovely comparison of memories to fireflies and ghosts. There's a problem with my laptop, sorry Login to Reply Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 8/9/2025 5:53:00 PM Sorry about your laptop, Valsa. That can be disconcerting! I appreciate your visit and lovely comments. You're a great encourager...color me grateful, hugs, Sara

Rowena Velasco Date: 8/9/2025 5:29:00 AM This is really lovely! I like how you compare memories to fireflies — small sparks that light up the mind in such a gentle way. The mix of happy and sad moments makes it feel super real and personal. Feels like a quiet moment of reflection. Login to Reply Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 8/9/2025 5:52:00 PM I appreciate your attention to detail and your exquisite comments that make me feel special as a poet. You're awesome, hugs, Sara