Memories

New rose Old rose splayed like ash dang you sure moved on fast. Our memories floating away like trash Into the multi-colored fabrics of the past. the ashes of what one was, scattered like the debris after a napalm attack. I've learned to move on yea thats a fact. She messed up our love, like im about to mess up yalls pact.

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Skat A

Date: 6/10/2013 8:24:00 PM

CHYNA, a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 6/8/2013 3:00:00 AM

It's great to read your piece this morning Chyna, I love your rhymes and flow of thought...it seems there is a typo in there ''LOKE'' should be 'LIKE'. I hope it didn't realy happen :) Welcome to the Soup my dear friend. PoetrySoup is a pleasant platform to share your heart and art. Feel free to enter member contests as it will help you gain more exposure and thereby learn. The pages has a lot of features that might interest you. Enjoy your stay. Peace and Friendship, Adeleke

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/7/2013 1:34:00 PM

Hello Chyna. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/7/2013 11:17:00 AM

A lovely poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)