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Across a noisy plane Where crowds gather You can hear their chatter and laughter I can still hear your heart beating Even though we are past that stage Of breathing because we have to The only thing I feel is you The only thing you feel is me It is more a case of it is the only feeling That keeps us going In anarchy and confusion This makes sense Feeling you Breathing you Even if it’s only through memories They sometimes talk the loudest
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/16/2020 2:09:00 AM
Back in my favourites Wilma, loved this then and still love it now...Hope all is well...Harry.
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Date: 6/25/2012 2:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with the warm and mesmerizing piece, Wilma! A sad couplet at the end...those memories feel as though we can reach out and touch them. I'm sure this write will touch the hearts and minds of many...nicely penned! Best wishes, Mikki
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Date: 6/22/2012 1:06:00 AM
Wilma congrats on your win...David
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Date: 6/21/2012 7:15:00 PM
Congratulations, Wlima, onyour poem winning.
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Date: 6/20/2012 9:14:00 PM
YES, this one of yours I love got on the list. Congrats. Very well deserved win.
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Date: 6/20/2012 6:32:00 PM
I loved this passionate piece, Wilma, nice one..Congrats on your win..:) jag
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Date: 6/20/2012 12:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning place xx
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Date: 6/20/2012 10:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win! ENCHANTING WRITE! I LOVE IT!
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Date: 6/20/2012 8:40:00 AM
Hi there Missy :D! This is definitely one of your wonderful gems that truly stayed with me! I distinctly remember this very vivid and wonderfully written poem and yet again, those last two lines of yours got to me :) Super congrats on your win in Chris' contest :D Mwahugs!
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Date: 6/20/2012 6:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Chris' "Be Yourself" contest Wilma. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/7/2012 11:04:00 AM
I loved this piece, Wilma - the last line was especially clever. lfde
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Date: 6/4/2012 12:19:00 PM
hope you had a wonderful day missy-- and sweet dreams to you later!! mwahugs!!
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Date: 6/2/2012 10:46:00 AM
10 across the board with this amazing piece my CTH/muse. A true beauty. Luv n long hugs Michael the Ark Angel
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Date: 6/2/2012 4:50:00 AM
wilma this a sweet, romatic and wonderful poem. And yes i could relate to this one. *smiles* Ron
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Date: 5/31/2012 5:43:00 PM
Simply romantic dear poet ! I just love these romantic writes Wilma ! Have a wonderful weekend my friend....much love, james
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Date: 5/31/2012 8:13:00 AM
what can i say, Wilma, to my fav with you, you've taken my breath away with this. harry.
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Date: 5/31/2012 7:49:00 AM
Romantic work..Thanks for stopping by my blog..I am in and out of feeling better..Kind of up and down..Sometimes those memories are the best because we want to remember only the good..Sara
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Date: 5/30/2012 10:43:00 PM
this makes me breathless!!! Love it, Wilma. One of your best!
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Date: 5/30/2012 5:17:00 PM
Hi Wilma, Memories do speak loud and clear and as you say they can be so real. I seem to have a lot I'd like to forget and hope yours keep you happy. A sweet verse to cherish! LUv, Lizzie
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Date: 5/30/2012 12:06:00 PM
Ah shucks, the power of memories, missy! The power of it all! I really enjoy the scene you set here, shucks hehe reminded me of something. Reading this sure just comes across as so vivid for me-- what you mean your muse has left the building? I think not!! Mwahugs! and hehe I read your comments, actually, ain't it funny how your last couple of lines here can relate to mine? And I actually got what you mean, so nope, you're not wayward, I actually thought that too, silence can be bliss. mwahugs!
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Date: 5/30/2012 10:26:00 AM
Wilma this is so cool, love it ..David
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Date: 5/30/2012 7:40:00 AM
Love the flow in this excellent write of yours Wilma!!
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Date: 5/30/2012 6:31:00 AM
Excellent lines--In anarchy and confusion/ this makes sense/feeling you/breathing you.Love this poem Wilma.Thanks for inspiring words at my poem.
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Date: 5/30/2012 6:01:00 AM
deeply enticing, wilms.. love the flow.. best wishes and huggs! :)
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Date: 5/30/2012 5:57:00 AM
So sweet and lovely Wilma, love it !!!! - Have a beautiful day in love and sunshine! - oxox Anne-Lise
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