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Memoriam

Somehow, this chariot of demise prepares for a long journey, away from the living: pack the roses from tomb to womb remove the thorns for gracious sake, like arrows that pierce my lesioned heart which cannot move on, raking the orchards over her crown; a name whispered in every fireplace she flamed. * From nowhere tonight, I hear her stir, clinging to the fading voice of the hours; as she bequeaths all moonglows I will inherit until at last, her gasp succumbs to wispy bliss. And I, a sighing child in denial must implore this: “ Wake up, you've been in bed so long, Mama, you should not be sleeping…” ~ 'Happy Birthday, Mama; I Miss You: Sept 18' Contest of Silent One: Poems that paint a picture 2 9/19/2017

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Date: 9/20/2017 8:05:00 PM
Congratulations Nette, for your well-deserved win with this exceptional poem.
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Date: 9/20/2017 6:36:00 PM
Excellent, as always, Nette. Tears are falling as I read this, knowing too well the level of loss when we lose our Mothers. Congratulations are well deserved. Peace and love always, Annalise ~*~
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Date: 9/20/2017 2:58:00 PM
congratulations Nette
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Date: 9/20/2017 1:05:00 PM
Winderful description. I really dig your style.
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Date: 9/20/2017 1:05:00 PM
Nette, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this amazing write!
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Date: 9/20/2017 7:37:00 AM
Congrats nette!
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Date: 9/20/2017 7:19:00 AM
Your writing is simply amazing Nette.
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Date: 9/20/2017 7:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement Nette, your poetry is brilliant as always. I loved this one...Maria
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Date: 9/20/2017 7:06:00 AM
Awesome first line, now that is poetry.. You always write so well.. Sadly no one can replace our mothers.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest
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Date: 9/20/2017 7:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement,
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Date: 9/20/2017 4:08:00 AM
I love this poem. The use of imageries is very apt and powerful. I have taken time to read a few poems written by Nette, and I must say I always feel alive reading her poems. One should dedicate more time to read Nette's poems (her prose-poems too). She's one poet I'll like to know more and work with.
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Date: 9/19/2017 8:26:00 AM
Excellent. Beautiful imagery write with penned well. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 9/18/2017 5:45:00 PM
Stunning imagery, Nette - what a beautiful expression of grief. I am sorry for your loss.
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Date: 9/18/2017 3:28:00 PM
Gripping poetry which captures the pain of losing a mother through your eloquent speechcraft. Last two lines moved me!
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Date: 9/18/2017 2:32:00 PM
Quite an emotional ending, nette! Written in beautiful words full of feelings--best wishes for a win!!
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