Memoriam

Somehow, this chariot of demise prepares for a long journey, away from the living: pack the roses from tomb to womb remove the thorns for gracious sake, like arrows that pierce my lesioned heart which cannot move on, raking the orchards over her crown; a name whispered in every fireplace she flamed. * From nowhere tonight, I hear her stir, clinging to the fading voice of the hours; as she bequeaths all moonglows I will inherit until at last, her gasp succumbs to wispy bliss. And I, a sighing child in denial must implore this: “ Wake up, you've been in bed so long, Mama, you should not be sleeping…” ~ 'Happy Birthday, Mama; I Miss You: Sept 18' Contest of Silent One: Poems that paint a picture 2 9/19/2017
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Ashley Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 8:05 PM
Congratulations Nette, for your well-deserved win with this exceptional poem.
Haick Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 6:36 PM
Excellent, as always, Nette. Tears are falling as I read this, knowing too well the level of loss when we lose our Mothers. Congratulations are well deserved. Peace and love always, Annalise ~*~
Webster Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 2:58 PM
congratulations Nette
Breedt Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 1:05 PM
Winderful description. I really dig your style.
La France Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 1:05 PM
Nette, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this amazing write!
Pandit Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 7:37 AM
Congrats nette!
Inman Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 7:19 AM
Your writing is simply amazing Nette.
Williams Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 7:07 AM
Congratulations on your placement Nette, your poetry is brilliant as always. I loved this one...Maria
One Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 7:06 AM
Awesome first line, now that is poetry.. You always write so well.. Sadly no one can replace our mothers.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 7:03 AM
Congratulations on your placement,
Ramos Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 4:08 AM
I love this poem. The use of imageries is very apt and powerful. I have taken time to read a few poems written by Nette, and I must say I always feel alive reading her poems. One should dedicate more time to read Nette's poems (her prose-poems too). She's one poet I'll like to know more and work with.
Sathasivam Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 8:26 AM
Excellent. Beautiful imagery write with penned well. Thanks for sharing it.
Krampe Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 5:45 PM
Stunning imagery, Nette - what a beautiful expression of grief. I am sorry for your loss.
Em Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 3:28 PM
Gripping poetry which captures the pain of losing a mother through your eloquent speechcraft. Last two lines moved me!
Pandit Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 2:32 PM
Quite an emotional ending, nette! Written in beautiful words full of feelings--best wishes for a win!!
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