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Melting Walls of Love- Hiku 21-

Written: June 20, 2025, for contest sponsored by Brian Strand **************************** claustrophobic h e a r t pounds beneath a l a b a s t e r~ no escape from l o v e ************** alabaster w a l l s melt b e n e a t h your whispered n a m e~ l o v e breaks every lock

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Date: 6/20/2025 9:49:00 PM
Very beautiful, Sotto-
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Date: 6/20/2025 7:02:00 PM
Very creative entry for the contest, Sotto Best wishes my friend. Cowboy Tex ... a.k.a. A poet friend from Texas, Bill
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Date: 6/20/2025 4:52:00 PM
I love: love breaks every lock!
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Date: 6/20/2025 3:55:00 PM
stunning and beautifully written! I loved it. I agree, love breaks every lock. Thank you for your words today, yellow rose
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