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Melded Decades

Abounding thrill elates me, blown away By beauty accessible, the chances To make tomorrow my ultimate day Road split with intricacy of branches Confronted with unexpected crest Summit draped under silver mystery Steep climb denotes scope will become accessed War torn heart grabs gradient gingerly Hands surrounded in shroud mount the challenge Pulled pebbles scatter below while I'm held Mist bliss invades injured brain's imagine Pinnacle opportunes suppressed dreams' meld Love for another bolsters oxygen With delve into mountain peak porcelain 5th October 2020 Written for Contest : Love Sonnet Sponsor : John Hamilton

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Date: 10/5/2020 8:28:00 AM
This is a lovely sonnet, it flows and rhymes so well..
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 10/5/2020 2:26:00 PM
That's so nice of you to say, Silent One. I find meter here virtually non existant, but okay as a kind of narrative.
Date: 10/5/2020 7:24:00 AM
I just loved it.I am actually learning how to write a sonnet but I am taking baby steps so this was really helpful.
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 10/5/2020 2:27:00 PM
Hello, Garima. Thanks for stopping in. I'll check your page. Yes, meter normally would feature a lot more... Have Best of fun, dear Poet.

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