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A pathway along the river leads to where its waters widen into the bay, an armada of small boats tug on mooring lines and beyond, rising up out of a reflected sky, the city sends golden spires high into the evening air. It's more than just a place, a city compounded of asphalt, concrete and plate glass, parklands with trees from countries overseas that read the changing seasons with green, red and yellow. Sprawling suburbs, cafes and coffee, all just a part of a greater whole where I live and is home to me. Not some sugary, thick spill of a patriotism born of a shallow pride is evoked here, no boast of better but a calm, silent sense of connection to the spirit of the soil and what grows here, what is built upon its spread and more, those I love who walk across its breadth. The soul must have a space to house its presence in this world, somewhere to relate to, to grow in, be part of and after being away, to return to and rest. There must be something sacred to nurture in the cradle of its ground, a love that holds back the harm of greed and the elevation of the self. There are other places, sure, equal if not better, some that have more charm or come near, but I am thankful that I draw my breath here.

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Date: 6/5/2024 9:39:00 AM
Hard to put one’s finger on that X factor we find in a place that feels just right, still you’ve managed it here without grandiosity, a sedate contentment exudes off your poem into the reader’s psyche, hope I find it myself someday, I’m almost there but never quite, super poem! Cheers David
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/6/2024 1:38:00 AM
Writing such poems comes with some risk...can easily enter into cringe territory...glad to hear that it maintained a disciplined tone. Value your trusted feedback David. Indeed count myself fortunate to have a place where the vibes are aligned and offer such pleasant surrounds. Take care my friend.
Date: 6/5/2024 9:12:00 AM
Beautiful Paul, very envious of your last stanza - somehow I've always felt misplaced.
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Date: 6/6/2024 1:27:00 AM
Thanks DD....do hope the world will smile and find you a place where all things become aligned and perfectly fit that soul of yours. Take care dear DD
Date: 6/5/2024 7:01:00 AM
Paul l don't have a deep poetic explanation or words to tell you how your poetry makes me feel all l can say is your words evoke a strong relatability, real emotion and connection….l just get it!! It just grabs me and takes me away! The last stanza in this poem “Oh my” did you read my mind then write it down with your incredible wordsmith gift!! Haha! In saying all that….l didn’t like this poem hehe!! Im so cheeky l know….its that wicked humour again!! Amazing write again my friend! Debx
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/6/2024 1:21:00 AM
Quite moved by your comments Deb...thankyou for such positive support. Made my day. The photo was taken by my wife from a place about a block away at the end of the street, a short walk. Very fotunate to be surrounded by such scenery all within walking distance. Take care my friend.
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Date: 6/5/2024 11:13:00 AM
Paul is that a photo you took in Melbourne in the area you live?? Debx
Date: 6/5/2024 5:28:00 AM
I feel like Dorothy Gale from Kansas... I love to travel but always grateful to return home. We need a safe haven to rest our souls, a cradle in which we were rocked and feel comfortable enough for peaceful sleep. "...Sugary... patriotism born of a shallow pride." Vundabar!
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Date: 6/6/2024 1:14:00 AM
Nice to have such a place...a safe haven from the wear and tear of modern life, or at least a refuge offering temporary reprieve. Always good to get an informed take on a poem, value your input and support dear Lin....

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