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Melancholy - Edvard Munch Whatever

The sediment courses with questionable energy, murky and conspiratorial

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2023 10:45:00 AM

Great first line and win. Congrats

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/17/2023 5:05:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, glad you liked it. It was a good reminder to try and start strong x

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/15/2023 5:14:00 PM

Dear Dilly Dally, your opening line is as dark as it is intriguing. Indeed, this verse sets a somber atmospheric mood and kindles the imagination. Congratulations for your exceptional placement in Suzette's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/17/2023 5:04:00 AM

Thanks Susan, it was an eye opening contest. Thank you for your kind words x

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/15/2023 10:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your one liner write. Have a wonderful day...................

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/15/2023 10:20:00 AM

Thank you Paula, I was pleased I managed a decent opening line - I had to track through so many to find one :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/9/2023 5:24:00 AM

oh, I like this a great deal. Loved 'sediment courses.' That's a powerful image coupled with questionable energy = brilliant! Enjoyed and am faving this one, hugs, Sara

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/9/2023 7:42:00 AM

Thank you Sara, as you know I love Munch artwork and find lots of emotion in them. This is first lines for a contest, but here is the full poem https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/melancholy_-_edvard_munch_1538684