Medusa My Love

Temple temptress, how I long for your lips, your milky white skin and sweet-scented hair. But alas, Athena has cursed you, for Poseidon's rape and sordid affair. Don't push me away, Medusa, my love, you're mortal, unlike your Gorgon sisters. And though inside you're filled with guilt and shame, when you flash your scales, your green skin glisters. If I but glimpse your face, I'll turn to stone, but I see you through the lens of my heart. And though slithering serpents crown your head, it is not enough to force us to part. Just say the word, and I'll kill Perseus, like the Gods, he's cruel and merciless. (Sonnet) 3/25/2018
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Barden Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 12:37 AM
Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, Emile - keep up the wonderful work, my friend - "A writer writes - always!"
Pinet Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 9:56 AM
Thanks Gregory, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
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April 12, 2018 at 9:17 AM
Another winner in my book, however, lol, congratulations on your placement... Mick
Pinet Avatar
April 12, 2018 at 10:19 AM
Thanks Mick, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 2:25 AM
I smiled all the way through this clever piece Emile. I loved it! The humor made it even more entertaining. Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )
Pinet Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 8:37 AM
Thanks so much Connie, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
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April 9, 2018 at 10:20 PM
Congratulations on your win with this well-written love letter! I enjoyed.
Pinet Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 8:37 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Haight Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 2:58 PM
Lovely Sonnet, Emile! Congrats on your fine podium win! Sandra
Pinet Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 5:08 PM
Thanks Sandra, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 12:43 AM
Congratulations on your fine win, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 8:47 AM
Thanks Subimal, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Carmack Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 11:34 PM
Emile, have not read one of yours in a while. Congrats on your win.
Pinet Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 8:46 AM
Thanks Rob, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Roper Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 9:28 PM
Great write , Emile..Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
Pinet Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 8:46 AM
Thanks Eve, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 6:37 PM
Lovely inspiration. Well done and congrats on your podium finish, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 6:56 PM
Once again Line, I thank you my friend, Emile.
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 1:30 PM
ah i see we were both inspired by the story of Medusa:-) :-) many congrats on your win Emile:-) hugs Jan xx
Pinet Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 3:25 PM
Thanks Jan, I'm off to read your poem my friend, Emile.
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April 8, 2018 at 12:15 PM
Excellent, Emile, well done, and thanks for entering my humble contest. Regards, Viv
Pinet Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 3:24 PM
Thanks Viv, I appreciate the placement my friend, Emile.
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March 26, 2018 at 8:56 PM
wow, VERY creative. I can't believe someone chose Medusa!! You can see beneath the surface into the inner soul! I was trying to remember the title of the poem in hotmail you told me to see (using the words for Broken Wings) Sorry I can't recall it. Looking at the titles at the top of your page, I can't see one that looks familiar to what you told me. (what a short memory I must have)
Pinet Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 8:54 AM
Thanks Andrea, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile. "Never Ending Story" was the title.
Ricci Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 5:30 PM
You are most welcome Emile. This entry is marvelous and is so poetry. It truly is breathtaking and I am speaking solely of your written words.
Pinet Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 5:44 PM
Once again I thank you my friend, Emile.
Ricci Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 10:32 AM
Hello Emile. I agree that this entry is powerful with so much emotion present. Thus your execution makes for wonderful poetry. Best of luck with the contest. May this day find you well.
Pinet Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 4:54 PM
Thanks so much Lisa, you have brought a smile to my heart my friend, Emile.
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March 25, 2018 at 9:12 PM
Powerful...bbn
Pinet Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 9:06 AM
Thanks Barbara, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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March 25, 2018 at 8:32 PM
Fantastic piece Emile! I smell a winner :) my best to you! xomo
Pinet Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 9:05 AM
Thanks Maureen, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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