Medusa My Love

Temple temptress, how I long for your lips, your milky white skin and sweet-scented hair. But alas, Athena has cursed you, for Poseidon's rape and sordid affair. Don't push me away, Medusa, my love, you're mortal, unlike your Gorgon sisters. And though inside you're filled with guilt and shame, when you flash your scales, your green skin glisters. If I but glimpse your face, I'll turn to stone, but I see you through the lens of my heart. And though slithering serpents crown your head, it is not enough to force us to part. Just say the word, and I'll kill Perseus, like the Gods, he's cruel and merciless. (Sonnet) 3/25/2018

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Date: 4/16/2018 12:37:00 AM
Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, Emile - keep up the wonderful work, my friend - "A writer writes - always!"
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Date: 4/16/2018 9:56:00 AM
Thanks Gregory, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/12/2018 9:17:00 AM
Another winner in my book, however, lol, congratulations on your placement... Mick
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Date: 4/12/2018 10:19:00 AM
Thanks Mick, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/10/2018 2:25:00 AM
I smiled all the way through this clever piece Emile. I loved it! The humor made it even more entertaining. Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )
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Date: 4/10/2018 8:37:00 AM
Thanks so much Connie, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/9/2018 10:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this well-written love letter! I enjoyed.
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Date: 4/10/2018 8:37:00 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/9/2018 2:58:00 PM
Lovely Sonnet, Emile! Congrats on your fine podium win! Sandra
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Date: 4/9/2018 5:08:00 PM
Thanks Sandra, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/9/2018 12:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win, Emile.
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Date: 4/9/2018 8:47:00 AM
Thanks Subimal, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/8/2018 11:34:00 PM
Emile, have not read one of yours in a while. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/9/2018 8:46:00 AM
Thanks Rob, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/8/2018 9:28:00 PM
Great write , Emile..Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/9/2018 8:46:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/8/2018 6:37:00 PM
Lovely inspiration. Well done and congrats on your podium finish, Emile.
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Date: 4/8/2018 6:56:00 PM
Once again Line, I thank you my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/8/2018 1:30:00 PM
ah i see we were both inspired by the story of Medusa:-) :-) many congrats on your win Emile:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/8/2018 3:25:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I'm off to read your poem my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/8/2018 12:15:00 PM
Excellent, Emile, well done, and thanks for entering my humble contest. Regards, Viv
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Date: 4/8/2018 3:24:00 PM
Thanks Viv, I appreciate the placement my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/26/2018 8:56:00 PM
wow, VERY creative. I can't believe someone chose Medusa!! You can see beneath the surface into the inner soul! I was trying to remember the title of the poem in hotmail you told me to see (using the words for Broken Wings) Sorry I can't recall it. Looking at the titles at the top of your page, I can't see one that looks familiar to what you told me. (what a short memory I must have)
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Date: 3/27/2018 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile. "Never Ending Story" was the title.
Date: 3/26/2018 5:30:00 PM
You are most welcome Emile. This entry is marvelous and is so poetry. It truly is breathtaking and I am speaking solely of your written words.
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Date: 3/26/2018 5:44:00 PM
Once again I thank you my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/26/2018 10:32:00 AM
Hello Emile. I agree that this entry is powerful with so much emotion present. Thus your execution makes for wonderful poetry. Best of luck with the contest. May this day find you well.
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Date: 3/26/2018 4:54:00 PM
Thanks so much Lisa, you have brought a smile to my heart my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/25/2018 9:12:00 PM
Powerful...bbn
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Date: 3/26/2018 9:06:00 AM
Thanks Barbara, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/25/2018 8:32:00 PM
Fantastic piece Emile! I smell a winner :) my best to you! xomo
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Date: 3/26/2018 9:05:00 AM
Thanks Maureen, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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