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I wrote this Poem with a minimalistic view of Nihilism. How appropriate. First and foremost, I am not a Nihilist and do believe in God. However, I have always had a passion for Philosophy and why people believe what they believe.

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Meditation on Meaninglessness

In shadow's tomb—
A dim, aimless flicker...
Void's grip, timeless 
claims all.

Fantomsound: life's song is just a cognition in the null.

Rain, pain—
Stardust, dust, flesh 
patternless on oblivions loom.

Decay's dance a molderwaltz,
Fingers grasp at phantoms 
no hope
Peace in the abyss's open arms. Not…

Unveiled—darkness, despair's shroud 
enigma's veil.

Hearts, no soul, toll; unpaid.
Dreams surrendered.
Woe's tale on wastesphere's icy breath.

Void's sigh,
Sun bleeds on the endless fight.
Souls adrift, yearning 
churning, burning
Accept, the void's silent 
starlit song mute.

From nothing, is nothing, in nothing / 
to nothing, for nothing
Fade to black...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 2/7/2024 10:07:00 PM
Thank You For Your Support, I'm new to this platform and Appreciate your Awesome, Inspiring craft as well. Sorry for my late response, I just now figured out how to :)
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Date: 2/8/2024 4:51:00 AM
Good Morning, Carlene. First, Welcome to PoetrySoup. I hope you find it rewarding and get great positive feedback. I have been on here for almost a year and met and friended many poets like us. I have been writing Poetry since High School and found away to get people to read them and respond. I will follow you and hope to see more of your amazing poetry. Welcome again! Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/6/2024 4:57:00 PM
I suppose basic nihilist might not paint the picture with any color. Hopefully, everyone who has life gets to understand the pleasure of helping others. Today, many do not. I did once believe that opulence would make me happy...it's a cultural belief in USA society. I now know that not to be true, and although I have no religious belief, I do think there are moral absolutes and a primary one involves overcoming selfishness and sharing this beautiful place and experience pleasantness.
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Date: 2/6/2024 6:04:00 PM
Duke, your reflection beautifully captures the evolution of personal beliefs and values. Your journey from seeking opulence to embracing the joy of helping others is very honorable. Your recognition of moral absolutes centered around overcoming selfishness and sharing enriches our understanding of human experience. Thank you for sharing your insightful perspective. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/3/2024 6:29:00 AM
How very SAD it it that some CHOOSE to view only the darkness in the world and life! You've done a good job capturing the nihilist mindset. I pray daily to the God nihilists don't believe in! Janice
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Date: 2/3/2024 9:57:00 AM
Dear Janice, your thoughtful comments on my poem mean a lot. It's disheartening to see some embrace only darkness. Your insight into the nihilist mindset is insightful. Keep shining your light in this world. I appreciate your perspective and your prayers. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/2/2024 10:36:00 PM
Yes, well.? Daniel as headaches go..But no you Outline a way some think, indeed.' Yet there is So much more, the great challenge of life is how Do we quantify it poets use words painters illustrate some carve.' Yet we all use matterial to Address eternity you used here 'black' yet its not A colour.' Even in this shadow world.' Oxymoronica abounds.' But the only truth is God.' It from me.' Who you don't know.! Lol)))
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Date: 2/3/2024 4:10:00 AM
Hey Joe, Thanks for sharing your thoughts! It's fascinating how we navigate life's complexities through different lenses—poetry, art, and philosophy. Your insights on the nuances of language and perception are thought-provoking. Indeed, amidst the oxymoronica, truth remains elusive yet profound. Looking forward to more engaging discussions!- Daniel
Date: 2/2/2024 8:40:00 PM
so dear sir, academic philosophy, to me, to myself....such the stringent exercise on the (mine) cerebrum...i left home at 17...and az far az my concern; learning the intellect yes, uv the pneuma i jaw with, yet, first the writer az yourself should know uv me, and it showz in mine write; i'm on the literature side uv intellect, and you sir are on the extraordinary to me philosophical side... bravo for your commitment....awesome jaw'n with ya....much love
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Date: 2/2/2024 9:00:00 PM
Hey James! Thanks a ton for your thoughtful reflections on my poem. Your journey and perspective add such depth to our conversation. It's fascinating how we each navigate the realms of intellect and expression differently. I appreciate your commitment to philosophy. Looking forward to more awesome exchanges. - Daniel
Date: 2/2/2024 5:06:00 AM
I agree to your philosophy, yet I believe in Darwinism. God is neither the creator nor the administrator of the world. Have Good Days
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Date: 2/2/2024 8:58:00 PM
Hello Anisha, thank you for taking the time to read my poem and commenting. Have a great weekend. - Daniel
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Date: 2/2/2024 8:58:00 PM
Hello Anisha, thank you for taking the time to read my poem and commenting. Have a great weekend. - Daniel
Date: 2/1/2024 6:16:00 PM
I've read many of the philosophers you mentioned Daniel. No time right now to discuss further. I liked your poem, well written and in line with Nihilism. Thanks for sharing. Bill
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Date: 2/2/2024 8:56:00 PM
Hey Bill! Thanks a bunch for taking a moment to read my poem and share your thoughts. Glad to hear you enjoyed it and saw the nihilistic vibe—it's always great to connect on those wavelengths. No worries about diving into the philosophical rabbit hole right now. Catch you later for some deep convos! - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/1/2024 8:19:00 AM
I am a Christian and accept that my brain is too small to understand the mysteries of God. Nonetheless, you expound on theories very well and agree to disagree.
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Date: 2/1/2024 11:25:00 AM
Hi, Victor. Thank you for coming and reading this poem and being a brother in Christ. Philosophy has always been a passion of mine from my early days. My philosophy professor from Messiah College encouraged me to study the Bible and also know what others believe, such as philosophy so that I could have an answer. This is the verse he gave me. 1 Peter 3:15 - "But in your hearts revere Christ as Lord. Always be prepared to give an answer to everyone who asks you to give the reason for the hope that you have. But do this with gentleness and respect." I have become more assertive in my Apologetics over the years because of his influence on me. Blessings, my Dear Brother. - Daniel
Date: 2/1/2024 6:53:00 AM
As you already know, I'm centered in faith, grace, love - GOD. This is interesting even though I feel so sad for those who don't feel the wonder of God's presence, His light reflected inside those who know Him. God bless you with much love, friend, love, Gina
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Date: 2/1/2024 11:19:00 AM
Hi Gina, Thank you for your note and for being a sister in Christ. Philosophy has helped me to get into good discussions with nonbelievers who want to destroy our beliefs. 1 Peter 3:15 - "Always be prepared to give an answer to everyone who asks you to give the reason for the hope that you have. But do this with gentleness and respect." - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/1/2024 5:12:00 AM
This is a stunning write in exploration of enlightenment out of nothingness. Much depth you convey through your potent words, Daniel. Among many: --life's song, a cognition in the null--Your poetic prowess shines!
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Date: 2/1/2024 11:14:00 AM
Hi, Vijay, Thank you for your kind comments and for visiting my page. Philosophy is such an interesting and neverending discipline. Many blessing, my friend. - Daniel
Date: 1/31/2024 7:15:00 AM
Hi Daniel, Wow such a thought provoking poem here. It's been so many moons since I read No Exit by Sartre. I think it's good that you are the kind of human who is curious and explores other philosophies of thought. How else can we ever understand each other deeply?
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Date: 2/1/2024 11:12:00 AM
Hello Nancy, Thank you for your note. I also remember reading No Exit in High School, and it was pretty shocking. Nonetheless, it got me interested in philosophy. Thanks for your friendship! - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 1/31/2024 3:26:00 AM
Dear daniel, first of all, regarding you note on top, maybe its how our brain works? You and i tend to be interested in same subject “ psychology “ which i did my masters in too. And for me i always want to understand why people believe certain things and so much more, and i question my friends from various beliefs on this, although im not very philosophical, i see a philosophers words whenever i read your work. and regarding your poem, ah those rhymes and the way youv written this is so creativ
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Date: 1/31/2024 4:47:00 AM
Dear Ink Empress, Thank you for your thoughtful comments. Your kind words are always a source of encouragement and inspiration. Made my day! Yes, it helps me to write poetry with psychology and philosophical ideas in mind. I love that we share some of that together. I, too, have a master's degree in counseling, and that is my vocation. Whereas Philosophy is a lifelong pursuit. Your comment about the poem being slightly different from my usual style is intriguing. It’s always a challenge to experiment with new styles and themes, and I’m glad you found it profound and worth the accolades. I look forward to reading your poems and thoughts on our future pieces. It is always a pleasure to hear from you. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 1/31/2024 3:28:00 AM
From alliterations to assonance and clever wordplay throughout , depicting human thoughts and what floats beyond, youv captured so very well here, a bit different to your usual type of writes but still is profound and worth all the accolades as youv delivered this in such eloquence. Ever word in this hits so strong. Pleasure reading this. Sending you light
Date: 1/30/2024 9:26:00 PM
Poem did have interesting descriptions. I think it is much more than nothing. I always like a new slant on stuff.
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Date: 1/31/2024 2:26:00 AM
Good Morning, Hilda, Thank you for comment on my poem. Have a wonderful day my friend. - Daniel
Date: 1/30/2024 4:51:00 PM
Daniel this is a great poem revolving around the concept of nihilism, exploring the emptiness and transience of existence. It delves into the skepticism towards traditional notions of meaning and value in life, reflecting on the existential void and the search for personal fulfillment in an indifferent universe. Diction is dark and evocative, using words like "shadow's tomb," "void's grip," "decays dance," and "darkness, despair's shroud" to create a sense of hopelessness and desolation. a fave
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Date: 1/30/2024 5:40:00 PM
Dear Sotto, I wanted to express my heartfelt gratitude for your insightful comments on my poem. Your thoughtful analysis truly clicked with me and added depth to my understanding of the piece. Your recognition of the exploration of nihilism within the poem’s themes affirms the direction I aimed to take with my writing. Your commentary on the diction and imagery used further highlights the intended atmosphere of desolation and existential questioning. Once again, thank you for taking the time to engage with my poem and for sharing your thoughtful insights. Your support means a great deal to me. Blessings, Daniel
Date: 1/30/2024 2:43:00 PM
I would so love to hear this one read aloud dear poet. I really enjoyed it, God bless
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Date: 1/30/2024 3:09:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend, and I will record it because you suggested it and post in the next day. Have a beautiful day. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 1/30/2024 1:33:00 PM
Well, I do wonder sometimes what would happen in this world if everyone had no faith, no morals, and no care for others and I know in my heart what would happen because we see it on the news every day in small doses, but those doses have increased over the years which tells me what would happen as a whole if no one had any beliefs and morals. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 1/30/2024 2:34:00 PM
Dear Sara, Thank you my friend for your thoughtful reflections on my poem. Your contemplation about the consequences of a world devoid of faith, morals, and care for others strikes a chord of shared concern. Indeed, the increasing doses of negativity we witness in the news hint at the potential outcomes if such values were to erode entirely. I appreciate your openness to engaging with challenging themes and your willingness to think about the implications they hold for our collective well-being. It’s heartening to know that the poem prompted you to reflect on these important matters. - Blessings, my friend, - Daniel
Date: 1/30/2024 12:03:00 PM
Nihilism is an interesting subject to write about.. Personally i believe people should be able to believe whatever they wish, as long as they done force it on others.. I believe in God, but I dont preach to others.. my faith is private.. Without you mentioning the subject, I would say your poem serves as a poignant interpretation on the existential themes of mortality, meaninglessness, and the human struggle for transcendence amidst the cosmic abyss.
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Date: 1/30/2024 2:31:00 PM
Dear Silent One, Thank you for sharing such insightful reflections on nihilism and the intricacies of personal belief. Your perspective on allowing individuals the freedom to hold their beliefs without imposing them on others is deeply admirable. Your acknowledgment of the existential themes in my poem is incredibly thoughtful. It’s heartening to know that its exploration of mortality, meaninglessness, and the quest for transcendence has found resonance with you. Your interpretation adds another layer of depth to the piece, and I’m grateful for your thoughtful engagement with it. May we always continue to explore such interesting topics with open minds and compassionate hearts. Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 1/30/2024 12:03:00 PM
Through its evocative imagery and haunting lyricism, the poem invites readers to confront the inherent fragility of life and the profound mysteries that lie beyond the veil of existence.
Date: 1/30/2024 9:54:00 AM
Nice poem
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Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 1/30/2024 9:59:00 AM
Good Afternoon, Jay. Thanks for reading and commenting. - Daniel
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