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Measured By Emptiness

Bereft and alone since love was lost, she sits in shadows, sipping claret from crystal. Day from night cannot be told. Time no longer sifts through the glass. Every hour is measured by emptiness. She's drawn the drapes, praying an eclipse will fill an abyss by swallowing the glowing moon. Entombed as though in a sepulcher, her insipid soul sits spiritless. No spark of life can be roused in vacant eyes or hollow heart. Naught but the dark does she seek; only that and sipping claret from crystal. April 11th, 2021 Anacreontic Verse Contest Sponsored by Silent One

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Date: 7/29/2021 2:49:00 PM
Hi Jenna, Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/29/2021 6:49:00 AM
Sorry, I've not been around.. Not much free time at the moment, and that means not enough time for Poetry Soup... Thank you for writing for my contest and apologies it took so long to judge.. Congratulations on your placement...
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Date: 4/12/2021 12:23:00 PM
What was it The Smiths said? ‘Heaven knows I’m miserable now.’ Seriously, Jenna, this depicts the subject’s desolate mindset perfectly. I don’t usually ‘get’ free verse... maybe this will make me try harder in future. Nicely done. Terry
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/13/2021 8:44:00 AM
Thanks so much, Terry. I'm more of a rhymer, but I think this contest called for free verse. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and please do try the form.
Date: 4/12/2021 5:11:00 AM
So many reach for the bottle in times of loss and stress but its only a temporary fix. Quite a sad verse Jenna. Tom
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Date: 4/13/2021 8:43:00 AM
I've been writing sad poetry lately, and I really don't know why. Thanks for the read and comments, Tom.
Date: 4/11/2021 11:26:00 AM
Well written, Jenna, deep and sorrowful. Good luck in the contest. Eve
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/13/2021 8:42:00 AM
Thank you very much, Eve.

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