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a garden dreamy gauzy with cobwebs wildflowers and I d r o p my backpack . . . _____________________________ May 22, 2016 Poetry/Non Traditional Tanka/meandering summer Copyright Protected, ID 16-793-902-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Short Forms For Summer, Part 3 sponsor, Andrea Dietrich Second Place

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James Inman

Date: 6/9/2016 1:09:00 PM

Sets a beautiful tone BW.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/28/2016 9:45:00 AM

Oh how creative Constance I love it:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 5/28/2016 2:54:00 PM

Jan, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations. ..

Charlie Smith

Date: 5/28/2016 9:00:00 AM

Creatively crafted B/W, congratulations on such high placement...

Constance La France
Date: 5/28/2016 2:58:00 PM

Charlie, thanks for the congrats !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/27/2016 8:59:00 PM

though the format is unconventional, I REALLY love this one. I have one similar to this format, Constance and it's the one most precious to me in my tanka collection. The way you had show yourself dropping the backpack with amazement to see the scenery is just beautiful. Congrats in my contest.

Constance La France
Date: 5/28/2016 2:59:00 PM

Andrea, I like to say creative, I love it too, better than some boring haiku any day... thanks for the contest and my win ~

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/27/2016 7:19:00 PM

I am back to congratulate you Constance. I am so happy to see this beautiful poem at the top! Brava! So well deserved! #7 ; )

Constance La France
Date: 5/28/2016 3:00:00 PM

Connie thanks for the congrats and the beautiful and 7 !!!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/27/2016 2:00:00 PM

Congrats on your well-deserved win! Janice

Constance La France
Date: 5/28/2016 3:00:00 PM

Janie thanks for the congrats, appreciate ~

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/27/2016 12:17:00 PM

Very nice, congrats on a great win. BG

Constance La France
Date: 5/28/2016 3:01:00 PM

Barbara, thanks for the congrats

Eve Roper

Date: 5/27/2016 12:09:00 PM

nice Tanka, congratulations on your win

Constance La France
Date: 5/28/2016 3:01:00 PM

Eve thanks for the congratulations !

Karam Misra

Date: 5/27/2016 11:36:00 AM

Excellent Tanka. Congrats on your fabulous win.~karam~

Constance La France
Date: 5/28/2016 3:02:00 PM

Karam, thanks for the excellent and the fabulous ~

Paul Callus

Date: 5/27/2016 10:10:00 AM

I too would have dropped my backpack, Constance!! Beautiful on all counts. Congratulations on a worthy podium finish. Regards // paul

Constance La France
Date: 5/28/2016 3:02:00 PM

Paul, any true poet would, thanks for the congratulations ~

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/27/2016 9:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your great placement on this contest, Broken Wings! 7 Hugs, Sandra

Constance La France
Date: 5/28/2016 3:04:00 PM

Sandra, thanks for the congrats and the 7 !!

Sandra Haight
Date: 5/27/2016 9:51:00 AM

Here's the 7!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/27/2016 9:50:00 AM

Very nice! Congratulations!

Constance La France
Date: 5/28/2016 3:03:00 PM

Kim, thanks for the congratulations ~

Lukas Ficklin

Date: 5/27/2016 9:46:00 AM

Congratulations Broken... Love the "drop" in this modern piece!

Constance La France
Date: 5/28/2016 3:05:00 PM

Lukas, thanks for the congratulations, yes the drop just came to me, and I love it too...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/22/2016 3:07:00 PM

stunning read, constance... hurry and relish summer!..huggs

Constance La France
Date: 5/28/2016 3:07:00 PM

nette, thanks for visiting and the compliment ~

Walter T. Ashe

Date: 5/22/2016 2:46:00 PM

I can actually see you "dropping your backpack" mesmerized by this scene! This is an interesting new form for me and this write I will study to know it! The absolute best to you in this contest! :-)

Constance La France
Date: 5/28/2016 3:08:00 PM

Walter, thanks for the compliment, this is a very unconventional tanka ... I like the drop line too ~

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/22/2016 11:59:00 AM

Your expressive imagery paints a vivid picture of this lovely scene Constance. It should do wonderfully in the contest. ; )

Constance La France
Date: 5/28/2016 3:09:00 PM

Connie thanks for the compliment on my poem, appreciate ~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/22/2016 9:26:00 AM

- It's a dream garden, B.W. - Lovely written - Gl. in contest ! - hugs & a 7 // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France
Date: 5/28/2016 3:10:00 PM

Anne, thanks for visiting with the lovely and the 7, appreciate ~