Me and Eeyore, On the Year of My Birth

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To be read in the deep slow monotone voice of Eeyore.

Just          my mother tryin for 
anothur          moment of agonised , blisful but
nevurending          hapiness, sharin with no one hur 
uninterupting          joy until my overly large but othurwise
average          head appears and the docter says, "anothur
regular          ordinary baby, happy new 
year          I'm sory, what did you say his name was"



08/13/2015

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Kp Nunez

Date: 8/22/2015 12:11:00 PM

Made me smile here, James. You have an understated sense of humor...hugs!

James Inman
Date: 8/22/2015 1:40:00 PM

Thank you Kim.

Constance La France

Date: 8/14/2015 9:42:00 PM

James, this is fun A7 and thanks for visiting my poem, his name is death, yes my dreams can be quite dark

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/13/2015 11:23:00 PM

this is so so cute!!! I just love it. Forget the birth month contest. go for that contest of John Lawless. I suppose he is wanting this kind of poem from what I have been seeing around here!! Good luck. You could win!! (also thanks for your sweet words on my poems tonight, seen right before I get ready to go off for the nigh!)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/13/2015 5:04:00 PM

It made me smile James:-) hugs jan xx

James Inman
Date: 8/13/2015 5:35:00 PM

Thanks Jan, I'm happy it worked.