Maze

he is but an anchorite
lost in the maze of life
twisting along like a vine
unable to scale the wall
he is trapped
somewhere inside
his mind
confined
to a sinuous past

a puzzle
without pieces
he questions
the thorns
of roses
as they prick
the blood
from his fingers

turning away
from the paths
of this garden
neglected
and choked
in the vines
of his past

June 28 2020
Maze 10 word challenge
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Wolves Avatar
September 27, 2020 at 8:01 AM
Excellent write
Kiser Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 6:14 PM
Oh wow, beautifully done. Congratulations on your win.
Watt Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 11:20 PM
To my favorite teacher of new words: thank you! I loved your free verse, and the word 'anchorite' that came along with it. You handled the 10-word challenge with ease (or so it would seem) with an intriguing tale told with your usual Sandra Adams flair. Loved the lines "somewhere inside / his mind / confined / to a sinuous past". Congrats on your win! hugs
La France Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 3:30 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my maze contest with this wonderful poem _Constance
Mishra Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 2:18 PM
This is really mysterious and thoughtful verse Sandra. An intriguing take on the theme. Congratulations on your win. :)
Somadas Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 12:22 AM
We two wrote almost in the same tone.. Great write Sandra.. Congrats..
Cunningham Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 4:10 PM
Your muse hit the right notes Sandra. Congratulations on your win. Tom
Sands Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 8:03 AM
Well written Sandra! I hope all is well :)
Hamilton Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 5:57 PM
This is very good Sandy, no one writes free verse as you do, hope your muse keeps singing!
Cunningham Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 1:55 PM
Brilliant use of the 10 words Sandra, your muse is on fire. Good luck in the contest Tom
Adams Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 2:05 PM
Thank you my muse has been sleeping and only breaking through in little spurts for several months, today she wants to sing... maybe that is a good thing... hugs
Trifiatis Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 12:43 PM
A wonderful , sensitive and profound poem dearest, Sandra that touches the reader's heart. Hugs xxx
Adams Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 2:06 PM
Thank you so much Demetrios... my muse has awakened for a spell... hugs XoXo
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