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My Grandma oft planted a floral maze, complete with twisting paths and dead-end trails. She’d buy garden gnomes at local yard-sales, setting scenes you rarely see nowadays. She'd design a puzzle meant to amaze, a lost art that was found in the details. She sculpted a sinuous ivy wall so, I'd be constantly turning around feeling trapped at times, and yet, still spellbound. And the smell was heaven, as I recall, lasting until the first frost of the fall when the leaves turned color and life shutdown. I found inner peace at the maze’s core, and couldn't have asked for anything more. (Verse) 06/23/2020

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Date: 4/20/2022 7:38:00 PM
"a floral maze" - Beautiful. Great description all through. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/22/2022 7:39:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/20/2022 6:18:00 PM
This is wonderful! Thank you for your submission and congratulations on your high placing win in the Garden Inspirations Poetry Contest! :) <3
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Date: 4/22/2022 7:38:00 AM
Thanks, BJ, I appreciate the placement and your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/1/2020 3:23:00 PM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my maze contest, excellent writing and a FAV for me, and I love your image too _Constance
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Date: 7/1/2020 4:43:00 PM
Thanks Constance, I appreciate the placement and your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/1/2020 2:08:00 PM
You took me on a nostalgia trip of joy with your muse Emile. This is beautiful. Congratulations on your top win. Blessings :)
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Date: 7/1/2020 4:44:00 PM
Thanks Aditi, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/1/2020 12:10:00 AM
couldn't have asked for anything more...than this poem of floral maze.. Elegantly done.. Great win Emile.. Congrats..
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Date: 7/1/2020 9:43:00 AM
Thanks Jenish, you made my day my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/24/2020 3:12:00 AM
Emile so often our gardens are like our poetry or art work are an innate insight into ourselves..a freudian 'slip' Stay Cretive
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Date: 6/24/2020 7:38:00 AM
Thanks Brian, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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