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Grandma's Maze

My Grandma oft planted a floral maze, complete with twisting paths and dead-end trails. She’d buy garden gnomes at local yard-sales, setting scenes you rarely see nowadays. She'd design a puzzle meant to amaze, a lost art that was found in the details. She sculpted a sinuous ivy wall so, I'd be constantly turning around feeling trapped at times, and yet, still spellbound. And the smell was heaven, as I recall, lasting until the first frost of the fall when the leaves turned color and life shut down. I found inner peace at the maze’s core, and couldn't have asked for anything more.
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Alex Avatar
April 20, 2022 at 7:38 PM
"a floral maze" - Beautiful. Great description all through. Congratulations!
Pinet Avatar
April 22, 2022 at 7:39 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Legros Kelley Avatar
April 20, 2022 at 6:18 PM
This is wonderful! Thank you for your submission and congratulations on your high placing win in the Garden Inspirations Poetry Contest! :) <3
Pinet Avatar
April 22, 2022 at 7:38 AM
Thanks, BJ, I appreciate the placement and your comments my friend, Emile.
La France Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 3:23 PM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my maze contest, excellent writing and a FAV for me, and I love your image too _Constance
Pinet Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 4:43 PM
Thanks Constance, I appreciate the placement and your comments my friend, Emile.
Mishra Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 2:08 PM
You took me on a nostalgia trip of joy with your muse Emile. This is beautiful. Congratulations on your top win. Blessings :)
Pinet Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 4:44 PM
Thanks Aditi, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Somadas Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 12:10 AM
couldn't have asked for anything more...than this poem of floral maze.. Elegantly done.. Great win Emile.. Congrats..
Pinet Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 9:43 AM
Thanks Jenish, you made my day my friend, Emile.
Strand Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 3:12 AM
Emile so often our gardens are like our poetry or art work are an innate insight into ourselves..a freudian 'slip' Stay Cretive
Pinet Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 7:38 AM
Thanks Brian, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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