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May Showers Remind Me of You

It’s sprinkling again, guess it’s that time of year- But every now and then it makes me shed a tear. And in the drops falling I feel you further from my side, I think of the month where you closed your eyes and died. It was the third of the month, actually a Saturday- A day of rain showers, unusual for the month of May. The grey in the clouds held a sadness, as did I, maybe cuz’ they lost their sun and had to darken and cry. The lilacs blossomed and the lilies barely bloomed, but I picked three pink ones placed them gently on your tomb. I’ll never forget the scent of rain pouring on your casket, but just then in the corner of my eye I saw a flowered basket. It held white roses, baby breath and blue carnations- In honor of your life, for you were a God-given creation. And pinned inside a note from your husband Joe, it said how much he loved you and wished you didn’t have to go. Salt pouring from my eyes was disguised by the rain- But I had a gentle feeling the sky could feel my pain. See, life hasn’t been the same since you passed away, that’s why I am reminded of you… during the rain showers in May. May 6, 2017

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Date: 5/14/2017 4:35:00 PM
OH MY, Laura, this is Such a good poem and sad . I see you did it with the theme of May Showers. I don't know what placement you got (will have to look and see again) but I think this deserved HIGH. Congrast. I can see you won. Soupmail.
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Date: 5/11/2017 1:48:00 PM
Sad and lovely, luloo. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 5/10/2017 11:11:00 PM
A sad, lovely poem! Congrats, Luloo!
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Date: 5/10/2017 8:26:00 PM
Very very sad, I wish this was a feeling none of us would have to go through.
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Date: 5/7/2017 8:27:00 AM
Beautiful Laura.
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