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This is inspired by our rainy season in our country. So fresh and cold. (May)

rainy days in May flowers bloom and scents the air mixture of colors carpeted the wider fields green mountains and hills are laid Written: Oct. 11, 2012 Fifth Place Winner Contest: Single Tanka Judged: 10/11/2012 12:00:00 AM Poet Sponsor: Black Eyed Susan Fourth Place Winner Contest: Tanka (Season) Judged: 10/23/2012 Poet Sponsor: Nathan - -D

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/2/2013 5:32:00 AM

Fresh fresh fresh...love your beautiful heart and pen.;-) "Mmmm did you say dinner. .. I will have breakfast in a few hours. Wish you could join me with a midmornig frappe' hope u enjoy your dinner. .. luv..pd"

Painted Hunter

Date: 2/14/2013 9:23:00 AM

Beautiful piece, Leonora...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2013 6:57:00 PM

Hello Leonora, how are you? missing you already :-)... thought I'd stop by to say hi and thank you for my many soup mail... I am also happy to see you top this poem in Susan's tanka contest. Today has been a rainy day here in Texas.. i wish i was not sad, and then maybe i would have enjoyed God's blessing today... always~ LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/5/2013 10:03:00 PM

Hi Leo, I was thinking about ... soup-mail...pd

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/28/2012 3:30:00 PM

Hello Lovely Leonora Libramate.. LOL.. that is (LLL) stopping by to say hi, and wish you lived in my time zone.. I assume you are snoring right now. zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzZZZZZZZZ,,, ZZZ,, jk,,,, it's 4:29 RIGHT ABOUT NOW down here in the lower side of Texas... love this tanka all over again. wish we had green of hills here.. it's all brown.. :-(... anyways, thought I'd stop by to say hi.. always your sis in the pen...PD

Joseph May

Date: 10/25/2012 5:40:00 AM

congrats on your win Leonora

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/24/2012 11:58:00 PM

Congratulations on your lovely entry placing with top honors Leonora. Bravo!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/24/2012 3:24:00 PM

very nicely done, Leonora! Big congrats to you in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/24/2012 3:20:00 PM

Contest results .... you won, congratulations. oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/24/2012 5:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Nathan's "Tanka (Season)" contest Leonora. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 10/24/2012 4:53:00 AM

Congratulations once more on another fine win Leonora xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/23/2012 11:58:00 PM

CONGRATS LEONORA ON A LOVELY WRITE AND WIN FOR MAY MY FAVORITE MONTH LUV ..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/23/2012 6:49:00 PM

HI LEO,,,MY SISIE-POOH, CONGRATULATIONS !!! :-) enjoyed your wonderful poem in Nathan's "Tanka (Season)" contest... take care~xox~PD

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/23/2012 5:27:00 PM

Great descriptive season tanka..Congrats on your win..Sara

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/18/2012 3:20:00 PM

Congrats on a beautiful piece and win!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/18/2012 6:21:00 AM

Excellent flow, rhyme, and rhythm..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Here we are going away from May only to look forward to seeing another one..Yours reads like a lovely May to remember..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/17/2012 10:42:00 AM

a lovely image portrayed above. tanka is like haiku in that capitalization is primarily used for proper nouns, Congrad's Light & Love

Len Gasun
Date: 10/17/2012 5:16:00 PM

thank you so much, Deb.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/15/2012 8:02:00 PM

Hello Leo, stopping by to say hi, and read your tanka,,, are you still in camp?? wondering!!!!! I like this poem, the rainy image left behind beauty to come.. love it... hoping to hear from you...xox~pd