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May Day Bliss

First kisses long past, the day to wed was now here, we neared the charming mill, the pond and two white swans foretold good fortune to all those who appeared. The Ode to Joy was playing as we two walked the aisle each young maid and groom stood and simply smiled and smiled. The priest and parents all enthralled nothing amiss This May Day we were joined, we hoped, into married bliss.

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Painted Hunter

Date: 5/4/2012 5:11:00 PM

Mercy...that's good! Rhyme royal? It looks as though I'm going to learn something on this site!

Kash Poet

Date: 5/3/2012 12:01:00 AM

A lovely poem.This is what Carol wants for her contest.Best wishes Debi.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/2/2012 8:45:00 PM

debs, what a lovely may memory. How long were you married? I was thinking to do a love poem on this topic too, if it's still around by the time I can get to it tomorrow.

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/2/2012 6:30:00 PM

This is a wonderful write! I really liked this poem immensely! This write has an amazing flow with the greatest spirit within it! I just love this glorious poem, magnificently spoken! I thoroughly enjoyed your poem that I have read this evening! Awesome Work!!