Maureen and the Hens

It’s dark outside,
I see a light:
Our neighbour’s lamp
Is shining bright.

She straps it to her head
And ventures to the shed.

In her robe and her boots,
She is creeping along,
And I wonder at first:
Am I seeing it wrong?

She raises the shutter
And the hens flutter out,
And perch on her person;
She protests with a shout.

She is covered in birds -
Not an inch to be seen -
And the fattest one sits
Like a crown on a queen.

Food saves the day;
Hens fly away.

The chickens peck
The food she leaves;
And Maureen cleans
Her mucky sleeves. *

* decided to keep it clean and say ‘mucky’, LOL

For Sheri’s rhythms contest, Rock me Round the Clock
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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February 16, 2015 at 12:07 AM
Jack, Nice Rock me around the clock win. ~Skat~
Roper Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 10:52 AM
Back again to congratulations on your win.Blessings and Happy Valentine’s Day Eve
Allison Avatar
February 13, 2015 at 2:29 PM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
February 12, 2015 at 11:40 PM
YOUR poem was so great for this contest. Hilarious one that I'd have put higher up!! Congrats Jack.
La France Avatar
January 30, 2015 at 10:29 AM
Jack this is so funny, I recall you telling me this story and seeing it in rhyme is wonderful, your mind is in an amazing place, and thanks for reading my poem "and that comes from within" a bit dark but you are right my muse is not just whispering but is shouting ~~
Hamilton Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 4:21 PM
lovely poem so funny Jack hugs 7
Thirtyseven Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 6:46 PM
Great write mate, full of humour. A wonderful read.
Horsman Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 11:11 AM
Brilliant Jack this sure Rocks, Happy New Year to you...
Dietrich Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 12:33 AM
Yes, I see how you wrote a poem out of that incident you related to me. WELL done, my friend. It has a fun humor!
Roper Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 9:48 PM
Very Good, and humorous good luck in the contest.Happy New Year with many blessings,
Fleming Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 2:32 PM
Entertaining lines and entertaining lives! Enjoyable little yarn, Jack. :) john.
Kendrick Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 1:11 PM
Cute one..Got a chuckle..This one reminds me of Robert Frost's poem "Brown's Decent" that is a line or two in it..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
Johnson Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 1:07 PM
If this is true, you're very lucky. To look out your window and see sleeves so mucky. To know quaint delight to inspire insight. One is grateful to share in such wonderful fare. Wishing you Happy Holidays jack. Peace. :)
Johnson Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 11:25 AM
Very funny. True story? Hope you had a merry Christmas and thank you for reading and leaving acknowledgements.. I will be getting back to Soup in the new year. Just too much going on. Love, Joyce
Eastman Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 10:26 AM
Fun read... Glad I stopped by.
Allison Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 9:49 AM
very humourous jack - I can relate to this we used to have about 100 chickens when I grew up:-) good luck:-) Hugs jan xx
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