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Matter's Illusion

Matter's eternal Not created nor destroyed Endlessly it is. Molecules combined Created life's illusion Serving no purpose Life makes no matter The burden of conscious thought purpose ever sought

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Date: 2/18/2011 2:18:00 AM
NICE! It takes me back to my Quantum Physics classes...and I love it...a 7!
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Date: 2/15/2011 2:06:00 PM
Terrific Haiku series Joe, love it....:)
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Date: 2/14/2011 4:51:00 PM
A wow poem , joe,, enjoyed with great image .. love the perception you share with us,.... take care,.. And have your self a happy Valentine Day,..p.d.
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Date: 2/13/2011 4:02:00 PM
I am always lost in thoughts , people will say, where are you? oh, writing a poem in my head, ha ha , your hakus are deep with thoughts~~
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Date: 2/13/2011 5:29:00 AM
I can tell you are a deep thinker Joe. These haiku provide a lot of inspiration for thought. Best to you, Diane
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Date: 2/13/2011 4:03:00 AM
Joe, we are all burdened by "conscious thought" as we try to sort through life's illusion. Indeed, matter is eternal but our thoughts seem fleeting. Well said, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/13/2011 1:22:00 AM
Nice Haikus on Matter and Life.Enjoyed--kashinath
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Date: 2/12/2011 10:41:00 PM
HI, Joe, thanks for your sweet comment on my poem today. Of these, the first one is my favorite. I enjoyed the double meaning of Matter that was employed when you said Life makes no matter in the third one. NO matter about the matter! An interesting haiku string!
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Date: 2/12/2011 9:27:00 PM
These are three decently written haiku. In the first line of your second entry, your word "molocules" is correctly spelled "molecules". Everything else looks fine.
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