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inspired by the song " master of the moon" by Ronnie James Dio, sponsored by Robert James L..

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Premiere Contest WinnerMaster of the Moon

L o v e and you, the f a d i n g
phase of lunar wings, 
spectral silver ~
floating in the deep, dark abyss
of the obsidian skyline,
refracting reveries of a redolent realm,
slipping and curling
through opalescent glass ~
like a window unfolding
truth veiled in twinkling twirls,
powdered with pearl dust
on the hidden face of you ~
between curved lines,
around lips of lament,
like Selene sailing
through sanguine ripples
on a sparkling chariot adorned
with citrine embers,
laced with fluorescent flames.
I dare you to trace the footprints
          of forgotten words...

And when the dusk falls
upon your trembling silhouette,
the moon reminds you
of scribbled solitude ~
etched within emptiness,
echoing aching blankness,
with no question nor answer,
no one to scream at you,
no wind to wrap you in warmth,
no colors to cradle coldness,
no stars to sew the silence,
no chorus to soften the pain ~
swirl back to the crescent hammock
emanating glistening gold.

O heartbeat of the hummingbird,
lost in the feathered horizon,
turn around and taste
the temptations of twilight.
Let your soul kiss
fervent fingertips of the sun ~
you are the master of the moon,
the artist of the acrylic air,
the weaver of fragrant dawns
before the seething storms;
the dreamer ~ carving compassion
with hazel haze.

We, the immutable poets,
plead in stillness, in need 
of your awakened conscience
to shape you, to make you ~
and return you to the unbreakable, 
as you rise
like a dragon’s pulse 
detached from the heinous heat 
of the megalomaniac sun.
For you will never
forge my breathless mind
to dwell in eclipsed darkness,
shackled by soulless shadows.

I am the master
                    and the mistress,
the queen of quiescence,
crowned in mystical musings,
enthroned amongst
thunderstruck galaxies ~
like a slave of the heaven
who fears not the unknown
but rules the moon and cosmos
forever engrossed in 
the esoteric eyes of 
       the celestial magic ~ 
u n t o u c h a b l e and u n m o v a b l e...
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Greenhough Avatar
July 8, 2025 at 8:12 PM
The moon and poetry, forever joined at the hip. This is a great poem . I love the metaphors. You are the genius of words.
Alhemaidy Avatar
July 3, 2025 at 4:39 PM
Belated congratulations on your deserved win dear lovely sweet Ink! Warmest best wishes!
Eslinger Avatar
June 30, 2025 at 2:10 PM
Empress, please check your SoupMail. Re this poem. Blessings
Silence Avatar
June 29, 2025 at 12:35 AM
Your words you create are true art every time I read you, my beautiful soul sis! As you soothe the heart and soul, for your words are a true consolation—understanding of each emotion your readers may be feeling, experiencing and keeping them afloat with the way you craft your brilliance! It’s truly leaves one breathless reading your depth and brilliance! The words you choose is soul searching and beautiful! It is truly healing and an honor to delve in the emotions it brings out!
Magdalinos Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 1:39 PM
Dear, Ink Empress. outstanding poem! Congratulations on your win.! Have a blessed weekend.
Hind Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 10:54 AM
Just Gorgeous writing, Ink!! Always are. Nothing less expected. Congrats on your win with this one!! <3
Gentile Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 6:27 AM
Ink Empress, your inspiration into fruition in the form of mystical verse is enchanting to read, to fantasize and comprehend! Congratulations!!
DiMino Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 4:00 AM
"I dare you to trace the footprints of forgotten words..." -- Powerful! Impactful! "For you will never forge my breathless mind to dwell in eclipsed darkness, shackled by soulless shadows." -- Beautiful! Outstanding poetry throughout. Enjoyed very much. Congratulations on well deserved win!
Gasun Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 10:33 PM
Big Congrats on your desrving trophy win my dear poet friend! Cheers! Thanks for sharing your superb poetic talent with us! God bless you more! Hugs
mysore Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 9:36 PM
breathless, congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
Dietrich Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 3:46 PM
Congrats on your trophy win. Well deserved , Ink.
Kendrick Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 12:58 PM
Interesting lines penned. Contest list look out. Sara K
Kavanagh  Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 10:57 AM
Big congratulations Ink on another one of your inimitable performances, and I say performance because you put more than mere words into your poems, I can sense energy too, for me the stand out ones in this piece; (As you rise like a dragon’s pulse detached from the heinous heat of the megalomaniac sun) that line has real power and menace, which is not easy to capture, A deserved win for sure, cheers David
Empress Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 12:07 PM
Thank you so much dear david, you did pick out the line that means the most to me in the poem. So kind of you to leave such a supportive comment. Appreciate your feedback truly and compliments, sending you light
Anaya Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 7:58 AM
Oh nice! I saw Dio reunion something like that at the Ozzfest way back when, I love their music fact: Ronnie invented the horn fingers, yeah. My favorite lines are "between curved lines, around lips of lament, like Selene sailing through sanguine ripples on a sparkling chariot adorned with citrine embers, laced with fluorescent flames. I dare you to trace the footprints of forgotten words" soulful imagery the works "I am the master and the mistress, the queen of quiescence, crowned in mystical musings, enthroned amongst thunderstruck galaxies like a slave of the heaven" it would be fabulous to feel that Some acdc too! Congratulations on a most deserved trophy IE m a g I c
Empress Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 12:09 PM
Thank you so much for your detailed and supportive comment, i must say i do not know the artist but I found the song/lyrics inspiring. Not familiar with his songs before the contest. And i am a capricorn not a Scorpio. Altho i do get along with scorpio often. Appreciate your support. Sending you light always
Anaya Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 8:01 AM
I love that album cover you used beautiful ( image) Divine Feminine Rising~perfect for master of the moon Great job!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 7:25 AM
Wow! I totally see why you received top honours.congratulations.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 6:04 PM
The pleasure is mine. You are very talented.
Empress Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 12:10 PM
So kind of your dear richard thank you so very much , always a pleasure hearing from you
Liguori Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 5:58 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win. Your poetry is magical.
Empress Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 12:10 PM
Thank you so very much dear robert for your kind support and for the inspiration, im grateful for the win. Thankful that some do appreciate my poems. Sending you light always
George Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 1:50 AM
"I am the master and the mistress, the queen of quiescence, crowned in mystical musings" . Your mystical musings make you the mistress and queen of this site. We see you wearing the tiara of gems on your head. Another jewel....! Congratulations, sweet poetess on your trophy win.
Empress Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 12:18 PM
Thank you sweet valsa your comments always make my heart warm . Sending you light always
Onclaud Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 4:09 PM
your artwords are aflame with rich, lilting hues on a poetic canvas...and what can be more stunning than selene, goddess of moon, at play... just lovely, ink and nice to see you up and about...namaste!
Dietrich Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 10:52 AM
Very beautiful as always. I was thinking of Luna as mistress of sky at night, but this is mysterious, and it feels like the moon is not the master, but something else is ruler of the moon and everything else. Did I get that right?
Dietrich Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 10:52 AM
thanks for seeing so many of my poems today. I can't wait for school to be out because I have to take care of tech issues with my laptop. Will tell you in an email.
Parker Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 10:06 AM
Your writing skills are impeccable, and your creative imagination is on its own level, a tender, beautiful spirit you have been endowed with, dear poet...Frederic
Rodrigues Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 7:07 AM
Lovely images! I loved the break of “no” lines. I brought interest to the poem! … O heartbeat of the hummingbird… powdered with pearl dust! Great!
Jones Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 2:31 AM
“Let your soul kiss fervent fingertips of the sun ~ you are the master of the moon, the artist of the acrylic air, the weaver of fragrant dawns before the seething storms; the dreamer ~ carving compassion with hazel haze” Love this! What a beautiful artistic soul you have!
Rhymes Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 1:51 AM
Master of the moon? Wow ! I’m in love .
Onpaper Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 1:46 AM
floating in the deep, dark abyss of the obsidian skyline, refracting reveries of a redolent realm, oooo come through alliterations !! Gorgeous .. dusk falls upon your trembling silhouette, the moon reminds you of scribbled solitude… ooo that imagery!! heartbeat of the hummingbird, lost in the feathered horizon,mmmm the calling sounds enticing!!! turn around and taste the temptations of twilight. Well well u dnt gotta tell me twice papi!!! Grrrrr ! I am the master and the mistress,oh yea papi!!! Talk sexay to me!!! This piece is an absolute beauty!!
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