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Marina Abramovic---I Am Striving To Look Into Your Soul

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MARINA ABRAMOVIC---I AM STRIVING TO LOOK INTO YOUR SOUL I’m in, I’m there let yourself go; I AM STRIVING TO LOOK INTO YOUR SOUL Each of us, look at us; I see; Sit down before I look at you blink twice; I stare as I share My soul vision My soul opens to you; Through my eyes I view; Look into my eyes; Witness to my soul; Blink once if you’re alive Twice if I’ve entered;; Look into my eyes; The entrance to my soul; Together we’ll stare; Is it heaven or hell? Gawking at my face; Look into my eyes Seemingly out of place; Piercing a smirk; My souls giving birth; In Awe… I stare Yes, I’m here Them eyes demise.. Demonized??? Stare a tear shed; My eyes bleed a clear breed… Are you there? (Here?) Blink twice; Shaken head; Reach out hold hands embrace; Captives glances captured claps approval Release departs; Wipe those tears away from your eyes and heart; Inhale chosen eyes; Open to watch and share others glance and stare; 12/29/18 For Contest “ Marina Abramovic” Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Date: 1/28/2019 5:18:00 PM
Powerful images and beautiful lines, James. Unfortunately it was longer than the 25-line maximum. What a shame I could not place your poem.
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Date: 1/7/2019 3:42:00 PM
James, very good, I found it hard to figure out what was going on in the video, so your poem really helped. Best of luck in the contest, but this reads like a winner to me ~
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James Edward Lee Sr.
Date: 1/9/2019 6:28:00 PM
????? very, very confused about this person, just wrote vividly what I saw... hope it places well just base on this... Blessings & Peace.. Thanks for stopping by to read.. James

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