March Mourning

Very nice Tanka...

I love the imagery! The final line has such impact with the daffodils. I could just settle on this poem. Each line worth the read! Hugs ~ Kim (fave)

Currents of secrets rushing,, Love that line, it says so much, just with four words, how do you do it?

Big Congrats to win on your wonderful Poem. Current of secrets…..reed-wrapped.. Very Nice. Blessings

Congratulations on placing 1st, Charlotte. Unfortunately, Nicola Bulley's death became a mixture of tragedy & entertainment. People seem to have lost control of their priorities :( Well done for your poem which does not look for sensationalism. ~ Best regards // paul

Nice tribute Charlotte. Congratulations on your win! :)

- A lovely gift from nature ... and beautifully written - Congratulations on top first place in the contest, Charlotte :) - hugs

A very beautiful scene is depicted in this short acrostic. Congratulations!

i went online and saw a bit about this in current news . Very nice how you wove this story into the acrostic. Congrats on a top place.

A terrible event..In an improving world? What A state of affairs.' Still the light must be shone In the dark corners.'

Greetings, Charlotte. A great Tankcrostic! Impressive imagery, Pangiota xx

Can feel what's not said by what's said...nice work Charlotte!

Sombre & Excellent. Your poems have some other dimension to them ..and I can't quite articulate what I mean by that other than to say 'a bloody good read'. Cheers - Gary

Sorry for your loss, Charlotte. You said a lot in 5 short lines. Beauty with a touch of sadness.

Good to see you back, was getting a bit religious on the bible site. The death of March, taking us into Aprils crying. Never done a tanka, actually, I've never done a haiku. Need to get a grip of myself.