March Has Naked Dawned

March has naked dawned... hills barren... trees 'green unseen... ~ harden, tender heart...

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Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 3/2/2019 9:54:00 AM

Harden, tender heart.. ! Loved it :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/3/2019 11:47:00 AM

Thank you, Swetha ... and may things be the opposite of what I've penned. I.e., may hard hearts soften (esp. with the advent of Spring!) ~ gw

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/2/2019 4:42:00 AM

March is my most ut-favorite month USUALLY; not so much yet. "hardened, snowy, blizzard month" this year. UGH! You have captured the "old March perfectly" and I want her back!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/3/2019 10:54:00 AM

Me, too. Let's head back to March of 2012 when, if memory serves me correctly, there were at least eight 80+ degree days. What say you?! Here's to and early Spring! :) gw

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/1/2019 8:00:00 PM

Hi Gershon, You caputured March, but look out Spring is coming. I enjoyed the read:-) Alexis

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/3/2019 10:49:00 AM

I am taking the words of your comment to heart, Alexis, and I am now vigilantly on the look-out for Spring. Here's what I see: This week in Chicago -- Monday's high 13 degrees with minus 10 degree windchills….warming up by Thursday all the way to 26 degrees (maybe)… Time to break out the beach gear, I guess. LOL... ~ Smiling anyway, Gershon

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/1/2019 6:32:00 PM

So perfectly captures March (really like 'green unseen'!)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/3/2019 10:39:00 AM

Well, let's hope the poem's only captured the March of years past. Perhaps this year will be the advent of 'green seen' in March in the Corn Belt and the Midwest (where you and I reside). Thanks for the encouragement and support, Michelle. :) gw