March 9th 2014

Soon time's change will be calling,
Its spring forward then fall back.
Shades of night are slowly falling,
Makes my head go clickty clack.

We work and save until we retire,
Thinking we'll enjoy a life of ease.
Only to find we're about to expire,
And Daylight Saving Time's a tease.

None of this seems to make sense,
I've never seen this time we save.
At least so far I'm not past tense,
Its sunup till set, until the grave.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Frankel Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 4:34 PM
great poem, best wishes Alex
Bauer Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 4:19 PM
very clever and entertaining! i enjoyed...
Pettit Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 3:43 PM
If you have ever studied calculus in school, then you would know what a "jump discontinuity" is. Daylight savings time provides a great example. You have a good poem here.
Callus Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 2:23 PM
That is why it's important to make hay while the sun shines. Wittily expressed thoughts. At least we know where we stand with time - it never varies! // paul
Parker Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 2:05 PM
Amen brother, as someone who never wheres a watch it all seems rather silly to me...one second its 12 the next its 1, now that makes time fly
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